Es wäre total nett wenn ihr mir diesen Text korrigieren würdet, da mein Englisch leider nicht so das goldene vom Ei ist:
Hello, my name is XYZ and I'm 15 years old. I am living in a House in XYZ, it's a small village about 30 kilometres from XYZ. I live there with my mother, my father and my little sister, XYZ, who is 4 years younger than me. In my freetime I enjoy doing a lot of hobbies, like ballroom-dancing, acting and playing the piano. Former I sang in choirs and had singing lessons, but I hadn't enough time, so I ceased both. Furthermore I am a very unathletic Person, once I did yoga and it was a lot of fun, but i'ts the only type of sport I like. I wouldn't say, I have a plenty of fears, but I'm quite afraid of heights, that's one reason, why I want to be a part of Summerschool, I heard about through a documentation on the TV. I applyed for summerschool, because I want to improve my english skills, learn to be more independent and to expand my horizon.
Außerdem habe ich noch ein paar Fragen:
Wisst ihr vielleicht, wie man die Sätze nicht immer mit "I" anfangen kann und wiederholungen meidet?
Ganz liebe Grüße,
Luxa
