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[heidi7]

hallo! ich bin neu da und kenne mich nicht gut aus. Ich würde mich sehr freuen, wenn jemand mir mit meinen Brief helfen kann.
Ich danke euch im Voraus!




Dear Ms. X,
I am writing in reference to your advertisement for English Course in the Sunday´s edition of Time magazine, in wich you offer a summer language course in Arkansas that meets my own expectations.
I learned English for six years at school in my home country. Therefore, I was working as a Flight hostess many years ago and I had to use it frequently in my job.
However, I now feel it is necessary to improve my pronunciation and grammar skills because I would like to get a better job when I finish my study at the university.
For this reason, I am interested and would be able to attend a three- month intensive English course with four or five hours per week if possible.
Could you explain me what levels you offer and how you decide wich class is suitable for the students, please?
Besides, i would also like to know if you have some leisure programs like yoga or dance and also about the accommodation. Depending on the cost, i would prefer to live with a host family, so that iI can practice my English as much as possible.I am also vegan, it means I do not eat meat or any diary products.
I am very pleasure if you arrange a host family who can cater my needs.
I would be grateful if you could send me further information or some brochure with price, program dates of registration and a application form for the summer course.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Your faithfully,

[Delfino]

Hallo!
Ich bin neu hier und kenne mich nicht gut aus.
Ich würde mich sehr freuen, wenn jemand mir mit meinen Brief helfen kann.
Ich danke euch im Voraus!

Dear Ms. X,
I am writing in reference to your advertisement in the Sunday's edition of Time magazine.
The summer English course which you are offering in Arkansas could meet my expectations.

In my home country I learned English for six years at school. Therefore, I was subsequently
able to find work as a flight attendant many years ago, where I had to use it frequently in my job.

However, I now feel it is necessary to improve my pronunciation and grammar skills,
because I would like to get a better job when I am finished with my studies at university.
For this reason, I am interested in attending a three months intensive English course
with four or five hours per week. Is this something you can offer me?

May I kindly ask you to explain what levels you are offering, and how you decide
which class is suitable for the students, please? In addition, I would like to know
if you organise any leisure program like yoga or dance and also about the accommodation.
Depending on the cost, I would prefer to live with a host family. This would enable me
to practice my English as much as possible.

I eat vegan, it means I do not eat meat or any diary products. I would really appreciate it
if you arrange a host family who can cater for my dietary needs.

I would also be grateful if you could send me further information or some brochure
which includes prices, registration deadlines and an application form for the summer course.

I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours faithfully,

...intensive English course with four or five hours per week.

This equates to an average of 1 hour per day
which is not very intensive unless you get a lot of homework.