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Dear...,
I am looking forword to find a job with a good workplace and nice staff and i wanted to tell you a bit about myself before we meet.
I finished my commerical school last year with a grade point average from 2,0. Therefore, I gained a good understanding of economy and among other subjects but i have many other unterstandings of other things.
I attended classes in English for 4 years and Latin for 3 years. Although I love the English language. I hope my confidence in using english gramar and the correct proununciation will improve during my stay in Manchester. This is one of the reasons why I'd like to spend some time in a foreign country.
I started working as helper at a building firm when i was about 15 1/2. I had this part-time job for about a year.
Afterwards at the age of 16 1/2, I was employed in the office of a general store. Half a year I moved on to working in a big outdoor store ( Jack Wolfskin ), which I have been doing on 3 days for a year now.
I see myself as a friendliy, hardworking and confident person. My friends and my staff say that I am open-minded, always in a good mood and a strong worker who see the work that they must done.
I don't mind physical work as I'm in a good shape. I also enjoy gaing experience by trying out new things, and I can easily adapt to a different enviroment. My work involved direct contact with many different people which i handled well. So I hope and think that I'd be perfect for you and your firm.
Kindest regards,
Andreas
HILFE !!!
