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tagebuch eintrag (SUCHE jem. der korrigiert)pls

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Ich brauche jemanden der diesen Text korrigiren kann und mir sagen kann was ich falsch gemacht habe. Ich bräuchte den Text bis Donnerstag weil ich an diesem Tag die Klassenarbeit schreiben.
danke in voraus :big_thumb:. Es handelt sich um die Gischichte von Nathan aus dem Englischbuch für´s Gymnasium G2



Dear Diary 9 of august 1996
Today it is Nathans Birthday. My family and I went to him to tea. After tea Nathan ,I and a lot of other kids came to the old railway line. Before we go our parents told us that if we should we go to the old railway line make sure that we do not go to nutritious to the new railway line. But we don´t hear them. We went to the new railway line.We heard a train that was still far away and circulations appeared in our direction raced and Nathan sais :,, I´ll jump onto it and take a ride on the train!"Then he jump but he fell down under the train. He cried because the train cut his legs off. I was so shocked and I think that I can never recover from this shock. My friend called the amboulance. After fife minutes the amboulance came with Nathans parents. His mother cried for many houres. I went with my family home and I begin to write this diary entry because I can´t sleep. I think I can´t never sleep.

Keswick (Contributor)

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