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Einen schönen Sonntagnachmittag!

Ich möchte mich in England für das anstehende Praxissemester bewerben und habe mühevoll ein Bewerbungsschreiben aufgesetzt. Ich wäre euch sehr dankbar, wenn ihr dies korrigieren würdet!

Vielen Dank bereits im Voraus!
Lg Mia





Dear …,


I am a german Care Management student at the Lutheran University of Applied Sciences at Nuremberg and I am writing to apply for a 20 weeks internship as a Health Service Manager within the XYZ-hospital commencing in September 2014.


During my time at the University Medical Center Salzburg in Austria and my currently work for Rummelsberger services for people with disabilities I was able to be part of a multidisciplinary team and provide professional support and reassurance to a huge diversity of people. I also advanced my ability to handle stressful situations with tact and patients and stay calm. As you will see from my enclosed CV my course as well covers a number of modules very relevant to work within your organisation, for example Strategic Management or Human Resources Management.

To gain international experience I have determined to do my internship abroad. I am very eager to gain practical experience by working abroad. This will allow me to improve my language skills and to learn more about a foreign country and culture as well.

I feel that the skills and strengths that I have developed during my studies, combined with my working experience and my interest for management, would allow me to make a positive contribution to your organisation.

Thank you for taking the time to consider my application. For further information, please feel free to contact me at any time. I greatly appreciate your interest and I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

[Keswick (Contributor)]

Einen schönen Sonntagnachmittag!

Ich möchte mich in England für das anstehende Praxissemester bewerben und habe mühevoll ein Bewerbungsschreiben aufgesetzt. Ich wäre euch sehr dankbar, wenn ihr dies korrigieren würdet!

Vielen Dank bereits im Voraus!
Lg Mia





Dear …,


I am a German Care Management student at the Lutheran University of Applied Sciences in Nuremberg and I am writing to apply for a 20 weeks internship as a Health Service Manager within the XYZ-hospital commencing in September 2014.


During my time at the University Medical Center Salzburg in Austria and my current work for Rummelsberger services for people with disabilities, I was able to be part of a multidisciplinary team and provide professional support and reassurance to a huge diversity of people. I also advanced my ability to calmly handle stressful situations with tact and patienceand stay calm. As you can see from my enclosed CV my course also covers a number of modules very relevant to work within your organisation, for example Strategic Management or Human Resources Management.

To gain international experience I have decided to do my internship abroad. I am very eager to gain practical experience by working abroad. This will allow me to improve my language skills and to learn more about a foreign country and culture as well.

I feel that the skills and strengths that I have developed during my studies, combined with my working experience and my interest for management, will allow me to make a positive contribution to your organisation.

Thank you for taking the time to consider my application. For further information, please feel free to contact me at any time. I greatly appreciate your interest and I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.