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[GC German]

Hello, I have to write a mediating about a very short text. I know, that it's difficult for you to assess my mediating, because you don't know the content of the story. I still hope, that you can help to correct the structure and speech.


"Mediating: Ward je in dieser Laun’ ein Weib gewonnen?

In this text there is called the statement, that women not always want a good looking guy, because this kind of men aren’t often faithful.
The women have in fact of this reason a force about the men, so the men will be dependent on the women, because they haven’t an easy way to get another woman.
Richard, which is an example for these statements, has also the talent for a good way to flirt and hold his girlfriend a sword.
But not just women want to have force, also men gets attractive, if they have power. And to get powerful, the men have to win maybe a brutal competition, where other people will lose there power and maybe there life’s. By this reason it is assumption, that the women have a little bit of evilness in there mind."

[Keswick (Contributor)]

Hello, I have to write a mediating about a very short text. I know, that it's difficult for you to assess my mediating, because you don't know the content of the story. I still hope, that you can help to correct the structure and speech.


"Mediating: Ward je in dieser Laun’ ein Weib gewonnen?

In this text there is called the statement (Sinn?), that women do not always want a good looking guy, because this kind of man isn't always faithful.
The women have in fact of this reason a force about (schau dir diesen Satzteil bitte noch einmal an) the men, so the men will be dependent on the women, because they haven’t an easy way to get another woman.(schau dir diesen Satzteil bitte noch einmal an)
Richard, who is an example for these statements, also has the talent for a flirting and hold his girlfriend a sword (Sinn?).
But not just women want to have force, also men gets attractive, if they have power (Sinn?). And to get powerful, the men might have to win maybe a brutal competition, where other people will lose their power and maybe their lives. By this reason it is assumption, that the women have a little bit of evilness in there mind. (Sinn?)"

Hi CG German,

Ich hoffe die Frage ist nicht zu unhoeflich, aber waere es moeglich die deutsche Version deines Textes mit in deine Beitraege zu fuegen, da mir manchmal der Sinnzusammenhang fehlt (siehe oben: Sinn?) und ich deine Texte dann nicht richtig verbessern kann, obwohl ich es natuerlich gerne wuerde?

Vielen Dank!
Keswick