ich möchte mich auf ein Auslandspraktikum bei einer meiner ehemaligen Firmen bewerben. Es wäre schön, wenn ihr meinen Bewerbungstext mal korrigieren könntet.
Hier ist er schon übersetzt:
Dear XYZ,
As a student of the Master's studies in mechanical engineering and former intern of the Max Mustermann GmbH for the completion of my bachelor thesis, I would like to gain international work experience with an internship in XYZ, which is one of the most multicultural countries worldwide. Thereby I take up the challenge of a new working sphere and encourage my character and my personality concerning of my communication skills, my independence and global teamwork.
The internship in XYZ mediates the first intercultural abilities for me and improves my English at the same time. Both abilities are important core competencies for the daily international working life and facilitate the cooperation with employees from all over the world.
In my time at the Max Mustermann GmbH, I concentrated on doing the analysis of current manufacturing processes in the area of XYZ for the detection of weaknesses and optimization potentials during the production flow. I very much enjoyed this task, so that I want to increase my manufacturing knowledge with another Internship in the production technology of XYZ systems. The thereby occurring combination of an international working sphere and practical manufacturing technology is also a good preparation for my future career in international engineering.
During the last years I did, parallel to my school leaving exam in XYZ, different internships and holiday jobs in the maintenance of manufacturing machines and gained practical experience in the forefront of my mechanical engineering studies. While the repairing of production machines, I proved my teamwork and flexibility and extended simultaneously my knowledge for technical proceedings.
I am convinced to fit in your reputable company and I would be glad to support you during my master studies with an internship from XYZ till XYZ.
I would be glad about a telephone appointment.
Yours sincerely,
Vielen Dank im Voraus
