Motivation

[TomB]

Hallo liebe Forenmitglieder,

um mich für ein Praktikum im Ausland zu bewerben, muss ich meine Motivation schildern, warum ich mich gerade bei diesem Unternehmen beworben habe. Es wäre sehr nett einen Blick darauf zu werfen und mein Schreiben zu korrigieren. Vielen Dank im Voraus.


The importance of international mobility for students is becoming more and more emphasized and I am very eager to gain practical experience by working abroad. xy is offering to gain experience in different countries.
It would be a great chance for me to work for a leading global provider of innovative and fully integrated supply chain solutions which has offices all over the world.
In a large company such as yours, I believe I could acquire better insight into my field of study and expand my experience and knowledge.
Even during my Bachelor program of Management, I have gained crucial practical experience in the field of Logistics. I worked several months for a Logistics company in Italy, where I was responsible for creating a gathering of data in order to give a quick response on the RFQ. Furthermore I was responsible for analyzing the sales our company compare to subsidiaries within the EMEA sector.
I am highly adaptable and motivated to integrate into any new work environment and the skills and experience I have gained so far would make a very useful contribution to your company’s team.
An internship would provide me with the ideal opportunity to assist at your organization and to expand my research skills.


Viele Grüße, Tom

[Delfino]

Dear Sir or Madam,

International mobility is becoming more and more important. Therefore, I am very eager to gain
further practical experience by working abroad while also applying my research skills.

[I see xy's offer as /  xy's offer is] an ideal opportunity to gain valuable experience in a foreign country. [/color]
It would be great to work for a leading global provider of innovative and fully integrated supply chain solutions.
This would allow me to gain additional insight into [international/strategic/operational] management,
my favorite field of study, while applying and expanding my practical experience and knowledge of logistics.

I worked several months for YZ, a logistics company in Italy, where I was responsible for creating
a gathering of data in order to provide quick responses to the RFQs. Furthermore, I was responsible for
analyzing the sales of the company in comparison to other subsidiaries within the EMEA sector.

I adjust quickly to a new work environment, and I am highly motivated to use my skills and experience
to contribute to the success of your company within the teams I would work in.

All global players have offices around the world. => avoid stating the obvious and repeating yourself

You didn't mention the time frame...