here's my second text of my "revision series", which is a fictive answer to an email. I really appreciate your help
. Thanks!To: John Miles
Sent: 14th January
Subject: Windermere Camp Site
Dear Mr Miles,
Thank you very much for your immediate reply to my request concerning the camp site in Windermere.
Unfortunately, starting on June 27th will be too late for the camp we are organising, as it is meant to be conducted within the context of a school project. To avoid date collision, it must take place in the first or second week of June. I would therefore like to come back to your suggestion of booking one of the two similar sites. Please send me the addresses of these sites, so I can compare the options. Furthermore, you have informed me that they were similarly equipped as the camp you had offered me previously. Could you please tell me what the exact differences between Windermere camp and the suggested alternatives are? The sports facilities are of particular interest for me.
Moreover, I require more detailed information about any deviations on my original booking, such as any difference in cost, accomodation or travel arrangements.
Thank you very much in advance!
Yours sincerely,
Petra H......