Handout The White House Korrektur

[david.d321]

Hallo ich würd mich freuen wenn ihr mal über mein Handout rüber schauen könntet und bei Fehlern sie nennen würdet. Verbesserungsschläge für die einzelnen Sätze sind natürlich auch okay. Danke im Vorraus



Handout: The White House
General information:
Location: Washington, D.C
Architect: James Hoban
Year of construction: 1800/1817
The White House is the official workplace and residence from the president of the United States


History:
George Washington chose the place of the White House. The foundation stone of the building was finished on the 13[sup]th[/sup] October 1792. On this day was also the foundation day of the new capital city: Washington.
On 1814 the British Army burned the White House in a war down.
On 1819 the same architect James Hoban led the rebuilding of the White House.


The White House today:
Today the White House has 132 rooms, 35 bathrooms, 412 doors, 147 windows, 8 stairways, a swimming pool, a tennis place, a cinema and a bowling alley.


Secureness:
It's not allow to fly over the White House without a license. In trouble there are jets which shoot the plane with special rockets down.
There is also a shelter which defend the people in the White House in emergency situations.
On the roofs are agents who defend the president with snipers.
Of course in the White House are cameras and censors.
The Secret Service and the Park Police guard the estate.


Others:
A picture of the White House is on the 20$ mark.

[Delfino]

Hallo, ich würde mich freuen wenn ihr mal über mein Handout schauen könntet und mir Fehlern nennen würdet.
Verbesserungsschläge für die einzelnen Sätze sind natürlich auch okay. Danke im Vorraus



Handout: The White House
General information:
Location: Washington, D.C
Architect: James Hoban
Year of construction: 1800/1817

The White House is the official workplace and residence
of the President of the United States.


History
George Washington chose the location of the first White House.
The foundation stone of the building was laid on the 13th October 1792.
This was also the day of the foundation of the new capital city: Washington.
During the war in 1814 the British Army burned the White House down.
In 1819 the rebuilding of it was led by the same architect James Hoban.


The White House today
Today the White House features 132 rooms, 35 bathrooms, 412 doors, 147 windows,
8 stairways, a swimming pool, a tennis court, a cinema and a bowling alley.


Security
It is not allowed to fly over the White House without a license.
Entering the airspace unauthorised will result in an attack by dedicated jets
which are to shoot down any intruder with their special rockets.
There is also an underground shelter to protect the staff in case of emergencies.
On the roofs are agents with sniper rifles who can defend the people in the building.
Of course the property of the White House is also checked by cameras and sensors.
The Secret Service and the Park Police guard the estate.


Others
A picture of the White House is included on $20 bills.

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