Englisch Bewerbung

[Alex2468]

Halla! Wollte mal wissen ob die Bewerbung so ok ist? Sollte man noch was dazu schreiben, wenn ja was? Vielen Dank im Voraus


Dear Sir or Madam,

In order to gain practical experience, I would like to apply for a three-month internship
at your company - preferably from 4th August until 7th November, 2014.

Currently, I attend the Higher Vocational School for Trade and E-commerce in XYX
from which I will graduate with a vocational baccalaureate diploma in 2014.

I have been interested in economic issues and operational processes for a long time.
Therefore, I decided to attend a higher vocational school to increase my knowledge
about economics after gaining my general certificate of secondary education.

My theoretical education has been complemented by my previous internships at
XYX GmbH and at XYX GmbH in Germany
which allowed me to focus on accounting, shipping and quality control. However,
another three months internship in business is required to gain my vocational baccalaureate diploma.

I show a lot of initiative, am reliable, willing to learn and willing to perform.
I am convinced to fully meet your needs and to start working with commitment and responsibility.
My skills I will use for the benefit of the company and its customers

I am looking forward to hearing from you.

[Keswick (Contributor)]

Halla! Wollte mal wissen ob die Bewerbung so ok ist? Sollte man noch was dazu schreiben, wenn ja was? Vielen Dank im Voraus


Dear Sir or Madam,

In order to gain practical experience, I would like to apply for a three-months internship
in your company - preferably from 4th August until 7th November, 2014.

Currently, I attend the Higher Vocational School for Trade and E-commerce in XYX
and I will graduate with a vocational baccalaureate diploma in 2014.

I have been interested in economic issues and operational processes for a long time.
Therefore, I decided to attend a higher vocational school to increase my knowledge
about economics after gaining my general certificate of secondary education.

My theoretical education has been complemented by my previous internships at
XYX GmbH and at XYX GmbH in Germany which allowed me to focus on accounting, shipping and quality control. However,
another three months internship in business is required to gain my vocational baccalaureate diploma.

I show a lot of initiative, I am reliable, willing to learn and willing to perform.
I am confident that I will fully meet your requirements and that I will work with full commitment and responsibility.
My skills will certainly benefit your company and your customers.

I am looking forward to hearing from you.

[Alex2468]

Danke auch hier für deine Hilfe

Kann man das so lassen oder sollte ich noch was dazu schreiben?

Hast du vielleicht auch noch Tipps wie man ein Lebenslauf schreibt?

[Keswick (Contributor)]

Das Anschreiben kannst du so lassen, das ist umfangreich genug.

Was den CV angeht kommt es halt drauf an wie du ihn halten willst. Willst du den CV nach deinen Faehigkeiten aufbauen? Nach deinem akademischen Hintergrund? Oder ganz traditionell?

Ueber Google finden sich da einige gute Beispiele.