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[doppelbett]

Hallo Leute,
ich muss eine Argumentation über das Thema(Breaking up with a friend by sending text message) schreiben. Ich habe soweit meinen Text fertig, nur es fehlen linking words und so :/ Ich bin nicht so der große Schreiber und hoffe deshalb, dass ihr mir helfen könnt!

Mein Text:
There are many ways how to break up a friendship but is a text message a good way?

In the following I want to discuss what aspects there are. When you send a text message, you can lie that means that you don't have to tell the real reasons or feelings to your friend. A text message is a short way to do it. Additionally you don't have to face your frend and you also can express yourself better but this way doesn't only have good sited. First of all you can hurt your friend much more than you can do normally. This way is an unpersonal way to talk. A further negative point is that you can't discuss the reasons.

I'd like to end up by saying that breaking up with your friend by sending a text message is a bad way to do it. I personally wouldn't do it and I think people don't deserve this way of breaking up with a friend.

Also das wäre 1 Seite voll geschrieben(mehr brauchen wir nicht).

[Sheldor]

Hallo Leute,
ich muss eine Argumentation über das Thema(Breaking up with a friend by sending text message) schreiben. Ich habe soweit meinen Text fertig, nur es fehlen linking words und so :/ Ich bin nicht so der große Schreiber und hoffe deshalb, dass ihr mir helfen könnt!

Mein Text:
There are many ways how to break up a friendship but is a text message a good way?

In the following I want to discuss what aspects there are. When you send a text message, you can lie that means that you do not have to tell the real reasons or feelings to your friend. A text message is a short way to do it. Additionally you do not have to face your friend and you also can express yourself better but this way does not only have good sited. First of all you can hurt your friend much more than you can do normally. This way is an unpersonal way to talk. A further negative point is that you can not discuss the reasons.

I would like to end up by saying that breaking up with your friend by sending a text message is a bad way to do it. I personally wouldn't do it and I think people don't deserve this way of breaking up with a friend.

Also das wäre 1 Seite voll geschrieben(mehr brauchen wir nicht).

I am also from Germany and I would like to comment your text as much as I can.

So far I have found some spelling an grammar mistakes.

Please remember If you write something on paper, you have to advertise (ausschreiben; don't -> do not; won't -> will not)
every single word! (I have not marked all of them)

[Keswick (Contributor)]

Hello,I have found some more mistakes and also took the freedom to correct some of Sheldor's mistakes.

Hallo Leute,
ich muss eine Argumentation über das Thema (Breaking up with a friend by sending text message) schreiben. Ich habe soweit meinen Text fertig, nur es fehlen linking words und so :/ Ich bin nicht so der große Schreiber und hoffe deshalb, dass ihr mir helfen könnt!

Mein Text:
There are many ways how to break up a friendship, but is doing so via text message a good way?

In the following I want to discuss what aspects there are. (aspects of what? Please specify further) When sending a text message, you could lie which means that you do not have to tell the real reasons behind ending the friendship, or about feelings towards your friend. A text message is a quick way to do it. Additionally you do not have to face your friend and you also can express yourself better but this way does not only have good sited. (sorry but this doesn't make sense. What do you want to say?) First of all you might hurt your friend much more than you normally would. Sending a text message is a very impersonal way to communicate. A further negative point is that you cannot discuss the reasons behind the break up.

I would like to end up by saying that breaking up with your friend by sending a text message is a bad way to do it. I personally wouldn't do it and I think people don't deserve this way of breaking upwith a friend.

Also das wäre 1 Seite voll geschrieben(mehr brauchen wir nicht).

I am also from Germany and I would like to comment on your text as much as I can.

So far I have found some spelling and grammar mistakes.

Please remember in written form, you should spell words like don't or won't in full. @Sheldor: this rules does not apply to can't, however if you decide to spell can't in full, please remembert hat cannot is one word!