Ich habe die Hausaufgabe bekommen, zu einigen, älteren Bildern etwas zu schreiben. Ich wollte es heute in der Nachhilfe korrigieren lassen, doch es wurde abgesagt... jetzt weiß ich nicht was ich tun soll ,da ich es bis morgen haben muss und es viele Fehler enthält, was ich auch weiß.. Kann es mit bitte jemand korrigieren?? Und bitte achtet besonders auf die Zeiten, ich wollte eigentlich nur Past Perfect und Simple Past verwenden. danke schon mal!
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My family history
This is my mother when she was five years old. Had she been a beautiful child?! This picture was mde in the kindergarden.
This is me. I was four month old and my mother had bought some knee protectors for me. I had to ward a winterjacket also it was too big. On this picture I almost became choked^^
That was my mom an me on the couch of my grandmother.
My favourite Teddy be named “Bankräubär” and I still love it.
My father put me in a jail and had named me “Monster”.
My favourite meal as spaghetti and I have enjoyed playing with it.
My cousin Robin and me in grandma’s “Affenschaukel”
This was on my first birthday, with my favourite pie rom “Benjamin Blümchen”.
We have built my first snowman when I was one year old.
In my grandma’s garden they called me “Zicke” and “Tussi”.
A few days later they has dresses me as a devil.
I had likes to war a special pullover from my mother, but it was too big.
My Grandparents had taken me to the holydays on the “Ostsee”.
Since the 23.09.2002 had borned my sister “Josie”. I may often give her the bottle.
My sister and me at the Christmas shooting, I was really tired.
When I was four years old, my stupid dad tied me, which made me cry.
New photos do not exist, because I refuse to let take photos of me.
