habe ein kleines Problem, und zwar muss ich morgen folgende Aufgabe abgeben:
Please write a text of 150 words +/- 10%.
Imagine the follwing situation: You are member of the audience listening to Mr. Obama's speech in Berlin.
What is its effect on you? Describe your feelings and/or give your opinion on a few aspects the American president mentions in his speech.
Structure your little essay!
Diese Aufgabe habe ich auch erledigt:
Obama convinced many citizens of the federal republic of Germany with his speech of 19th June, 2013 in Berlin. He spoke about difficult issues such as the fight against poverty or
the fight against terrorism, but he gave the audience hope and belief in universal peace, too.
With the words "Hello Berlin" and "We have to make history" the president was just as open to our nation, such as John F. Kennedy 50 years ago at the same location but at a
different time, a more difficult time.
The main topic was the history of Berlin, coupled with the time of the Soviet Union.
Especially due to the integration Mrs Merkel's who spent a childhood under these circumstances, the speech took a very sensitive and emotional shape.
Another subject was the nuclear disarmament in his speech. The aim should be, to reduce nuclear warheads by about a third in just four years. This goal aims of the president for a long time without any success. So it doesn't sound credible to me and the most other citizens.
Vielleicht kann von Euch jemand mal drübergucken und mir eine Rückmeldung geben, was ich verbessern müsste, damit mein Textchen
perfekt ist (Rechtschreibung und Inhalt).Würde mich sehr freuen.
Mit freundlichen Grüßen
We are all volunteers, so you need to adjust your tone accordingly!