Wäre lieb wenn jemand kurz über meinen Text schauen würde :)

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Theluckyone

Wäre lieb wenn jemand kurz über meinen Text schauen würde :)

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Es wäre total lieb wenn jemand meinen Text lesen würde und gegebenenfalls etwas korrigieren würde :)
Es handelt sich um ein Stundenprotokoll.

Liebe Grüße :)


We started todays lesson with listening to sara, who kept the minutes the lesson before.
She talked about the Leaflet of the british army.

Immediately afterwards Fatlume informed us about the News in the USA.
She focused on one of the biggest and worst California wildfires this year, which has burned into the Yosemite National Park.
There is only a spark needed to start a big fire. There are a lot of sequoias, which are considered to be a symbol for the national park - A lot of them burned down.
About 2.800 firefighters struggled to contain the wildfire.
To finish up she took a look at the Hetch Hetchy reservoir that provides San Francisco with drinking water.
She mentioned that it would be a problem if ash would fall into this reservoir.

After her presentation she got her Feedback.

Than we've got the Information that our english course will move between language and content. The next time we will Focus on the language part.

At the end of the lesson we played an interview game. Therefore we had a worksheet with twenty different questions.
Each person had a partner he could ask some questions. The Intention of this game is to speak a lot. You have the opportunity to discuss something, to swap ideas or to explain something to your classmate.

Ein großes Dankeschön im vorraus :)

Keswick (Contributor)

Re: Wäre lieb wenn jemand kurz über meinen Text schauen würd

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Theluckyone hat geschrieben:Es wäre total lieb wenn jemand meinen Text lesen würde und gegebenenfalls etwas korrigieren würde :)
Es handelt sich um ein Stundenprotokoll.

Liebe Grüße :)


We started today's lesson with listening to Sara, who took the minutes the previous lesson.
She talked about the leaflet of the British army.

Immediately afterwards Fatlume informed us about the news in the USA.
She focused on one of the biggest and worst Californian wildfires this year, which reached the Yosemite National Park.
It only takes a spark to start a big fire. There are a lot of sequoias, which are considered symbols of the national park. A lot of them burned down.
About 2.800 firefighters struggled to contain the wildfire.

To finish up she took a look at the Hetch Hetchy reservoir that provides San Francisco with drinking water.
She mentioned that falling ash could cause a problem for the reservoir.

After her presentation she received her feedback.

Then we were informed that our English course will move between language and content. (not sure what you want to say here?)
The time after that we will focus on the language part.

At the end of the lesson we played an interview game. For this we had a worksheet with twenty different questions.
Each person had a partner they could ask some questions. The intention of this game was to speak a lot. You had the opportunity to discuss things, to swap ideas or to explain something to your classmate.

Ein großes Dankeschön im Vorraus :)


Well done!
Achte auf Gross- und Kleinschreibung ;-)

Theluckyone

Re: Wäre lieb wenn jemand kurz über meinen Text schauen würd

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Vielen lieben Dank, ich finde es toll, dass sich die Mühe gemacht wird :)
Da habe ich wohl einige Fehler gemacht, ein paar davon sind mir im Nachhinein selbst aufgefallen :D
Ein großes Dankeschön.
Liebe Grüße :)

Delfino

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Then we were informed that our English course will cover several linguistic topics and
also include some further information related to intercultural communication
,
anglistic culture and current affairs.