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Hallo,

Wäre nett wenn sich jemand diesen Text von mir ansieht?

Think i understand it know. Our brain can make natural scenes, those scenes gotta have to be aktivities, it is natural, because as humans, our live includes activities all the time. We gotta remember activity based information and also always the correlation between those activities(there meaning). Our brains is not made up for pure logic stuff, allthough we gott an memo system for it too, dunno if this info is right, i read at gma, we got an reflex memo, this typ of memo is responsible for those typ of info.

We gotta differenciate here to, i want to get good, not dependend on logic memo.
I also think, a normal guy cant get to this level, because his hardware has his limits, the guy mentioned in this book had an handicap.


Wo sind meine großen Schwächen?
An was muss ich besonders arbeiten?

lg
Danke im vorraus.

Delfino

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Beitrag von Delfino »

hansk hat geschrieben:Hallo,

Es wäre nett wenn sich jemand diesen Text von mir ansehen würde.

Think I, understand it now.
Our brain can create natural scenes, but those scenes have to be activities. Really? I can think of other things too.
This is natural, because the lives of humans include activities all the time.
We have to remember activity based information and also always the correlation between those activities (their meaning).
Our brains are not made for pure logic, although we have a memory system for it too, I don't know if this information is correct.
I read at gma (???) that we have got a reflex memory, this type of memory is responsible for those types of information. Really?

Here we have to differentiate too, I want to get good at processing information logically and not depended on my memory.
I also think, a normal guy can not get to this level, because his hardware has limits.
T
he guy mentioned in this book had a handicap.


Wo sind meine großen Schwächen?
I is always capitalised.
Review the use of an vs. a.

An was muss ich besonders arbeiten?
Please avoid the use of "gotta", "dunno", "memo" and "info" especially in written English!

:watch: Please use a dictionary or at least a spell checker!

Online dictionaries
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LG

Danke im Vorraus.

Delfino

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Beitrag von Delfino »

Englische Grammatik - Regeln und Erläuterungen
http://www.englisch-hilfen.de/inhalt_grammar.htm

Der unbestimmte Artikel - a/an - im Englischen
http://www.englisch-hilfen.de/grammar/artikel2.htm

Online dictionaries
ftopic2481.html