Hallo ! Ich würde bitte dringend Hilfe benötigen !

[woelfin]

Hallo ich würde mich freuen wenn ich hier jemanden finden würde der mir bei der Übersetzung helfen könnte bzw es mir übersetzen würde !
Meine Eltern haben heuer ihren 60. und 70. Geburtstag und ich plane eine Überraschungsparty. Und dazu habe ich eine Rede geschrieben die mir schon auf Deutsch etwas schwer gefallen ist, weil ich nicht so wirklich wusste was ich sagen soll. Nun da aber auch Finnische Freunde zur Party kommen die Englisch Sprechen würde ich diese Ansprach auf Englisch benötigen. Da der Google translator aber so viel "müll" übersetzt wollte ich fragen ob es hier einer oder eine netten gibt der mir helfen könnte. Da mein Englisch leider nicht so gut ist und ich es seit 20 Jahren nicht wirklich gebraucht habe. Ich wäre sehr sehr sehr dankbar wenn es sich hier jemanden finden lassen würde !


Anbei habe ich eine Frage da ich ja auch neu hier bin kann man hier im Anhang auch posten oder müsste ich denn diese Anrede vollkommen hier rein schreiben ?

[Delfino]

Hallo woelfin,
und willkommen hier im Foum.

Ja, hier gibt es nette Leute die dir bei der Übersetzung helfen können.
Aber ohne die Rede und deinen ersten (auch lückenhaften) Übersetzungsversuch
geht es eben nicht ...


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[woelfin]

Das ist die Deutsche Anrede !

Ich begrüße euch im Namen der Familie K. ganz herzlich.
Schön, dass ihr heute alle gekommen seid, auch das Mamas und Papas Finnische Freunde gekommen sind um den Geburtstag meiner Mutter - eurer Freundin, guten Bekannten und natürlich auch Ehefrau - zu feiern.
Ein richtiges Fest soll es heute werden. Wenn es nach meiner Mutter gegangen wäre säßen wir alle heute zu Hause und würden dort nach- dem wir gegessen und getrunken haben uns alle wieder vor unseren PC oder Fernsehr setzen und uns beschäftigen. Hier mach ich dir liebe Mama ein Strich durch deine Rechnung und schimpfen kannst du dann zu Hause mit mir !

Dass wir nun hier sitzen, mit der doch großen Zahl der Freunde unseres Familienhauses ist es ja auch ganz schön. Und wollen wir es mal so sehen: zu Essen und Trinken bekommen wir ja auch hier.

Nun habe ich hier ein Paar Worte:

Weil Mama Geburtstag hat, hab ich mir überlegt:
Ich schreibe den Gedanken auf, der mich grad so bewegt. Ein paar liebe Zeilen, allein nur für sie, Die möchte ich notieren, doch frage ich mich wie.
Wie lässt sich ausdrücken, in Worten oder Satz, Wie sehr wir sie mögen, denn sie ist unser Schatz. Für uns Kinder war sie schon immer die Größte, Na und für Papa natürlich die Allerschönste.
Da gab es schon manches Hoch oder Tief, Doch Mama war stets da, wenn man sie rief.
Mit uns Kindern, da gab es schon mal ein Problem, Doch Mama blieb stets cool und stand über dem.
Gab es mal Streit, oder einer war krank, War Mama zur Stelle, Gott sei Dank!
Auch wenn Papa mal quälte ein Zipperlein, Wußte sie Hilfe, ließ ihn nicht allein.
Heut sagen wir Danke und wünschen ihr Glück! Sie schaut auf ein erfülltes Leben zurück.
Liebe Mama, bleib glücklich, zufrieden und froh, meistere dein Leben, mach weiter so!
Von ganzem Herzen Danke für deine Güte und Liebe!
Wir wünschen uns, dass es noch recht viele Jahre so bliebe!
Gesundheit und Glück und nur das Allerbeste,
Liebste Mama, wünschen wir dir zu deinem Ehrenfeste!

Auch möchte ich hier wenn auch vorzeitig papa gratulieren
Lieber Papa,
heute zu Deinem Ehrentag bin ich es nun, die eine Rede halten mag. Die Zeit ist wie im Flug vergangen und die Jahre zogen ins Land, doch Du bist stets der geblieben, den wir alle so lieben, kennen und schätzen gelernt haben. Kein Sturm, mochte er auch noch so schwer sein, konnte Dich aus der Ruhe bringen, Du lieber Papa warst für uns immer der Fels in der Brandung. Deinen Rat und Deine Hilfe nehmen wir auch heute noch sehr gerne in Anspruch
und die liebevolle, manchmal etwas schroffe Art ein Vater zu sein, wird von uns allen, vor allen Dingen von Deinen Kindern, sehr geschätzt.

Ich habe lange über meine Worte nachgedacht und dann ganz einfach beschlossen, es genauso auszudrücken, wie es auch ist. Ehrlich und mit Liebe zu Dir, denn ohne Dich wären Mama und wir Kinder nicht dieselben Menschen wie wir sie heute sind. Du hast uns geprägt, uns geformt und immer wieder auf den richtigen Wege zurückgebracht, wenn wir dabei waren ihn zu verlassen. Manchmal musste es auch ein strenges Wort sein, aber stets wussten wir, dass es nur aus Liebe zu uns so gehandelt hast.
Die Dankbarkeit auszudrücken, dass wir Dich als unseren Vater, Freund und natürlich auch Ehemann heute zu Deinem Ehrentag so hoch leben lassen können, ist schwer in Worte zu fassen. Denn nichts auf der Welt kann ausdrücken, wie sehr wir Dich lieben und schätzen.
So wollen wir auch dir, auf für die kommenden Jahre viel Gesundheit, Glück und Zufriedenheit wünschen. Genieße noch viele, viele Jahre im Kreise Deiner Lieben und wir hoffen, dass auch wir Dich so glücklich machen konnten, wie Du uns.
Danke lieber Vater für Deine Liebe und Dein Verständnis.
Danke, dass es Dich gibt..
Liebe Anwesenden, lasst uns das Glas erheben und auf unsere Geburtstagskinder anstoßen:
Auch in Zukunft wünschen wir Euch Glück, Liebe und Gesundheit. Wir wollen auf Euch trinken und mit Euch noch viele schöne und erfüllte Jahre mit erleben!! Zum Wohl…..und auf eine schöne und gemütliche Feier!
und nun ist Schluss, es gibt gleich was zum Essen

und hier wäre mein versuch der übersetzung (bitte nicht böse sein aber wie gesagt mein Englisch ist eine reine katastrophe )

I welcome you most sincerely in the name of K. family.
Nice that you are all here today, also Mamas and Papas Finnish friends have come to my mother's birthday - your friend, good friends and of course his wife - to celebrate.
A real Festival it should be today. If it was up to my mother, we were sitting at home all day and would here-after we have eaten and drunk all of us sit down in front of our computer or television and deal. Here I'll love you Mama a line through your account and you can then scold at home with me!

That we sit here now, but with the large number of friends of our family house, it is also quite beautiful. And we want to see it again: we get to eat and drink here, too.

Now I have a few words:

Because mom's birthday, I've been thinking:
I write on the idea of the degree moved me like this. A few love lines of, only for you, which I would like to write, but I wonder how.
How can be expressed in words or phrases, how much we like them, because it is our treasure. For us children it has always been the greatest for Na and dad of course the most beautiful thing.
Since there were already some high or low, but Mom was always there when she called.
With us children, as there was ever a problem, but Mom was always cool and stood over the.
Were there times disputes, or was ill Mom was on the spot, thank God!
Even when Papa times a tormented niggles she know help, did not let him alone.
Today we say thank you and wish her all luck! She looks back on a full life.
Dear Mom, stay happy, satisfied and happy, take charge of your life, keep it up!
With all my heart thank you for your kindness and love!
We hope that it would remain quite so many years!
Health and happiness and all the best,
Dearest Mama, we wish you to your Honor Hold!

Also, I would like to congratulate though early papa

Dear Dad,
Today, I am now your special day, which may make a speech. The time has flown by and the years went by, but you're always the left, as we all love to know and have learned to appreciate. No storm, he might not be that hard, could take you from the rest, you were dear papa for us always rock solid. Your advice and your help we are still very much in the claim
and the loving, sometimes brusque way of being a father is very much appreciated by all of us, especially of your children.

I've been thinking about my words and then simply resolved to put it exactly as it is. Honestly and with love for you, because without you we would mom and children are not the same people as we are today. You've influenced us, shaped us and always brought back again to the right path, if we were about to leave him. Sometimes it had to be a strict word, but we always know that there have been only out of love for us that way.

Express the gratitude that we have you as our father, friend and husband of course also can let your special day so high alive today, is hard to put into words. Because nothing in the world can to express how much we love and appreciate you.

So we also want to wish you, on for the coming years much health, happiness and satisfaction. Still enjoying many, many years in the circle of your loved ones and we hope that we could make you as happy as you are.

Thank you dear Father for your love and your understanding.
Thank you that you exist ..

Dear guests and friends, let us raise our glasses and drink a toast to our birthdays:
In the future we wish you happiness, love and health. We want you to drink, and experiencing with you many happy and fulfilling years with! For the good ..... and on a nice and cozy celebration!
and now it's over, it's the same thing for dinner

[Delfino]

May I kindly welcome you all on behalf of the K's family.
On this wonderful occasion of ...’s 50th and ...'s 60th birthday,
I'm delighted to say just a few words before we eat.

I am very happy to see so many good friends and their partners -
in particular Mama's and Papa's Finnish friends who have also been able to join us
to celebrate my mother's birthday today.

I hope you all enjoy this great event. Although if things had gone according to my mother
after we have eaten and drunk, we would be sitting at home all day - either in front of
our television or computer - But that is not gonna happen today - sorry mom...

Please look on the bright side: we will also get good food and fine drinks here,
and we will have a great time with a large number of friends of our family.

Now, a few personal thoughts for my lovely mum as it's her birthday.
I really struggled and wondered how I can put my feelings into words
that express how much we love and treasure her. For us children
she has always been the best and for dad of course the most beautiful woman.
Like everyone we experienced some highs or lows, but mom was always there when we called.
Whenever there was a problem mom stayed cool and kept things under control.
In times of dispute or illness our mom was there for us, thank God!
Even when dad struggled - she was always there to support him.
Today we say thank you and wish her continued happiness and health.

...

[woelfin]

Ein rießen danke danke danke ! Man merkt das ich mit dem Englisch total auf Kriegsfuß stehe ! Das klingt gleich ganz anders ! könntest du vielleicht den absatz bezüglich für meinen Papa auch vielleicht noch mal anschauen ? Falls du zeit hättest ?

[Delfino]

Ein Riesendankeschön! Man merkt das ich mit dem Englischen total auf Kriegsfuß stehe!
Das klingt gleich ganz anders! Könntest du vielleicht den Absatz für meinen Papa auch noch anschauen?
Falls du Zeit hast...

Firstly, may I kindly welcome you all on behalf of the K's family.
On this wonderful occasion of ...’s 50th and ...'s 60th birthday,
I'm delighted to say just a few words before we eat.

I am very happy to see so many good friends and their partners -
in particular Mama's and Papa's Finnish friends who have also been able to join us
to celebrate my mother's birthday today.

I hope you all enjoy this great event. Although if things had gone according to my mother
after we have eaten and drunk, we would be sitting at home all day - either in front of
our television or computer - But that is not gonna happen today - sorry mom...

Please look on the bright side: we will also get good food and fine drinks here,
and we will have a great time with a large number of friends of our family.

Now, a few personal thoughts for my lovely mum as it's her birthday.
I really struggled and wondered how I can put my feelings into words
that express how much we love and treasure her. For us children
she has always been the best and for dad of course the most beautiful woman.
Like everyone we experienced some highs or lows, but mom was always there when we called.
Whenever there was a problem mom stayed cool and kept things under control.
In times of dispute or illness our mom was there for us, thank God!
Even when dad struggled - she was always there to support him.
Today we say thank you for always being there, as a friend and someone to talk to.
Thank you for your love and kindness over the years.
We hope that you will enjoy the next part of your life
and wish you wholeheartedly continued happiness and health.


Although a bit ahead of time we also want to congratulate our dad.

Dear dad,
The time went by in a flash and now it's on me to give a speech.

Years went by and you have always been there for us as the father
we all love, and the friend we have learned to appreciate. We could
could count on you being calm and prudent even in turbulent times
when you stood out like a rock in the waves and supported us with
your help and advice which we have been made use of until today.

The loving, sometimes rather brusque way of being a strong father
is very much appreciated by all of us - especially your children.

I've been thinking about my words and then simply resolved to put it exactly as it is -
honest and with love for you. Because without you - mom and we, the children,
would not be the same people as we are today. You've influenced us, shaped us
and always helped us to find the right path. Sometimes it had to be with strict words,
but we always knew that they have only been used to clearly state your position,
which was an act of love for us.

You have been our father, friend and husband of course. Therefore,
it is hard to express our gratitude, because no words can fully assert
how much we love and appreciate you every day.

Nonetheless, we want to wish you good health, harmony and happiness
for the coming years. May you enjoy many more years in the circle of
your loved ones, and we hope that we can make you as happy as we are.

Thank you dear father for your love and your understanding.
Thank you that you exist.


Dear friends and guests, let us raise our glasses and drink a toast to you:
For the future we wish you happiness, love and good health.
We are looking forward to experience with you
many more happy and fulfilling years!

I hope to see you all next year, or the next time we are together.
And I hope even more so that we are as healthy and as happy as we are today.
A massive thanks to everyone for coming, have a great time and enjoy the food.

It is a speech in English, a foreign language to most guests,
so use short sentences and speak loud, clear and slowly.

The capitalised Father sounds like a reference to God.


I'd just like to say a massive thank you to you all for coming today,
I hope you're having a good time.


May your hours of reminiscence be filled with days
of good cheer and weeks of pleasant memories. (toast)


Vielleicht kann einer der Profis hier im Forum bei Gelegenheit
noch einen prüfenden Blick auf meinen Entwurf werfen. Danke.

[Keswick (Contributor)]

Not sure whether I should consider myself one of the experts but I had a read through and apart from a "gonna" (something that I personally try to avoid) the text looks spot on .

[Delfino]

@Keswick
Yes, I would consider you one of the few experts here
as your English skills are much more profound than mine.


I see myself as the IT guy with some gut feeling regarding the use of English,
and I usually try to avoid mistakes by checking myself as much as possible
without using any of the books which you've probably read and studied in-depth.

[woelfin]

Ein Riesendankeschön! Man merkt das ich mit dem Englischen total auf Kriegsfuß stehe!
Das klingt gleich ganz anders! Könntest du vielleicht den Absatz für meinen Papa auch noch anschauen?
Falls du Zeit hast...

Firstly, may I kindly welcome you all on behalf of the K's family.
On this wonderful occasion of ...’s 50th and ...'s 60th birthday,
I'm delighted to say just a few words before we eat.

I am very happy to see so many good friends and their partners -
in particular Mama's and Papa's Finnish friends who have also been able to join us
to celebrate my mother's birthday today.

I hope you all enjoy this great event. Although if things had gone according to my mother
after we have eaten and drunk, we would be sitting at home all day - either in front of
our television or computer - But that is not gonna happen today - sorry mom...

Please look on the bright side: we will also get good food and fine drinks here,
and we will have a great time with a large number of friends of our family.

Now, a few personal thoughts for my lovely mum as it's her birthday.
I really struggled and wondered how I can put my feelings into words
that express how much we love and treasure her. For us children
she has always been the best and for dad of course the most beautiful woman.
Like everyone we experienced some highs or lows, but mom was always there when we called.
Whenever there was a problem mom stayed cool and kept things under control.
In times of dispute or illness our mom was there for us, thank God!
Even when dad struggled - she was always there to support him.
Today we say thank you for always being there, as a friend and someone to talk to.
Thank you for your love and kindness over the years.
We hope that you will enjoy the next part of your life
and wish you wholeheartedly continued happiness and health.


Although a bit ahead of time we also want to congratulate our dad.

Dear dad,
The time went by in a flash and now it's on me to give a speech.

Years went by and you have always been there for us as the father
we all love, and the friend we have learned to appreciate. We could
could count on you being calm and prudent even in turbulent times
when you stood out like a rock in the waves and supported us with
your help and advice which we have been made use of until today.

The loving, sometimes rather brusque way of being a strong father
is very much appreciated by all of us - especially your children.

I've been thinking about my words and then simply resolved to put it exactly as it is -
honest and with love for you. Because without you - mom and we, the children,
would not be the same people as we are today. You've influenced us, shaped us
and always helped us to find the right path. Sometimes it had to be with strict words,
but we always knew that they have only been used to clearly state your position,
which was an act of love for us.

You have been our father, friend and husband of course. Therefore,
it is hard to express our gratitude, because no words can fully assert
how much we love and appreciate you every day.

Nonetheless, we want to wish you good health, harmony and happiness
for the coming years. May you enjoy many more years in the circle of
your loved ones, and we hope that we can make you as happy as we are.

Thank you dear father for your love and your understanding.
Thank you that you exist.


Dear friends and guests, let us raise our glasses and drink a toast to you:
For the future we wish you happiness, love and good health.
We are looking forward to experience with you
many more happy and fulfilling years!

I hope to see you all next year, or the next time we are together.
And I hope even more so that we are as healthy and as happy as we are today.
A massive thanks to everyone for coming, have a great time and enjoy the food.

It is a speech in English, a foreign language to most guests,
so use short sentences and speak loud, clear and slowly.

The capitalised Father sounds like a reference to God.


I'd just like to say a massive thank you to you all for coming today,
I hope you're having a good time.


May your hours of reminiscence be filled with days
of good cheer and weeks of pleasant memories. (toast)


Vielleicht kann einer der Profis hier im Forum bei Gelegenheit
noch einen prüfenden Blick auf meinen Entwurf werfen. Danke.

Vielen Vielen Vielen Danke ! ich weis nicht wie ich noch euch danke sagen könnte !

Was meinst du mit dem Satz :
The capitalised Father sounds like a reference to God.

Der kapitalisierte Vater klingt wie ein Bezug auf Gott. ??? Hab ich das richtig übersetzt ?

[Delfino]

to capitalise = to write or print in capital letters or with an initial capital

father vs. Father

meaning:
father vs. God / a Christian priest


See also
http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/father

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/God_the_Father
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Father

[woelfin]

to capitalise = to write or print in capital letters or with an initial capital

father vs. Father

meaning:
father vs. God / a Christian priest


See also
http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/father

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/God_the_Father
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Father

Aha danke jetzt bin ich Bilde ! na ein Priester oder Gott er mein Papsch nun nicht wirklich und wusste eigentlich nicht das es in meiner ansprache auch so rüber kommt ! Es waren eigentlich meine Erinnerung in meiner Kindzeit und die wollte ich eigentlich zum vorschein bringen und ich hab es ihm auch zeit weise nicht wirklich leicht gemacht ! Aus diesem Grunde hebe ich ihn zum "Gott" hinauf.

Aber ich möchte dir wirklich ganz herzlich für deine Übersetzung bedanken! Also mit meinem Englisch hätte ich das nicht zusammen gebracht bzw sieht man auch deine Übersetzung im zuge auf meine Übersetzung da liegen ja welten dazwischen ! Also ein ganz ganz ganz großes Danke dafür !