Bewerbung Freiwilligenprojekt-leider dringend

[Bäumchen]

Hallo ihr Lieben,
es wäre nett wenn nochmal jeamnd über meinen Text lesen würde-denn leider ist mein Englsich noch etwas holprig.Danke schon im voraus

Appling for the project “Carnaval de Nonformal”

Firstly , Iam very interested in the project “...l” developing cultural projects.I like to become a part of he project experiencing cultural get-together and learning from each other.The differnt countries of the volunteer living and working together in host countrie makes the project even more exciting

Moreover , I am very interested in other cultures and their different ways of living, which is one of the reason for my interest in participating in voluntary work abroad.. On the way, I hope to improve my social and language skills.
I will gain some international experience and qualities that will be helpful in my future live
Futhermore I like the idea of making myself useful and living on my own in a foreign country.
The volunteer project will allow me to widen my horizons beyond the limits of tourism by becoming a part of society, and I want to know more about the way of living in Romanian.In addition it will raise the intercultural dialogue between the volunteer and of course the host country,too.

Furthermore, I have an interest in Romania as a host country, because I am convinced that in a period of globalisation having social responsibility means we have to look out for each other.Even if Romania is a part of Europa wir wissen noch zu wenig voneinender
Promoting non-formal education,is in my opinion, agood possibility to have a positive impactand (diesen näher zu bringen??)

All in all I hope to hear more from you,
Yours sincerely

[Delfino]

Hallo ihr Lieben,
es wäre nett wenn noch einmal jemand über meinen Text lesen würde,
denn leider ist mein Englisch noch etwas holprig.
Danke schon im Voraus!


Application for the project “Carnaval de Nonformal”


Dear Sir or Madam,

Firstly, I am very interested in developing cultural projects.
I would like to become a part of the project “Carnaval de Nonformal” to share my experience, to enable cultural exchange and to learn from each other.
The different nationalities of the volunteers who live and work together in the host country make the project even more exciting.

Moreover, I am very interested in other cultures and their different ways of living, which is one of the reasons for my interest in participating in voluntary work abroad.
Additionally, I hope to gain some international experience, to improve my social and language skills which will be helpful in my future life.
Futhermore, I like the idea of making myself useful and living on my own in a foreign country.
The volunteer project will allow me to widen my horizons beyond the limits of tourism by becoming a part of society, and I want to know more about the way of living in Romanian.
In addition, it will raise the inter-cultural dialogue between the volunteer and of course the host country too.

Furthermore, I have an interest in Romania as a host country, because I am convinced that in a period of globalisation having social responsibility means we have to look out for each other.
Although Romania is a part of Europa we don't know much about each other.
Promoting non-formal education is, in my opinion, a good possibility to have a positive impact on the ground.

All in all I hope to hear more from you,

Yours sincerely,
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You might want to cut some of the long sentences in half - creating two.
The English and English speaking foreigners like short simple sentences.

You also need to learn to keep an eye on all the little details when writing an application.
(same fonts, font size, spaces, punctuation, style of speech, no contractions...)

Apart from the subject line you don't say what your letter ought to be, why do you write them?
I suggest you spell it out in the first paragraph.