Übungsätze Written Expresion TOEFL ITP

[slope]

Hallo zusammen,

ich habe ein paar Sätze, die Fehler enthalten. Die Fehler habe ich rot markiert. Allerdings bin ich mit meiner Lösung unsicher. Ist die Fehlerqelle und die Lösung richtig erkannt worden?

Die Fragen haben wir als Übungsätze zum TOEFL ITP behandelt. Im Test ist nur die Fehlerfindung erforderlich. Doch ich würde gerne genau Wissen, was der Fehler ist. Mir würden Stichpunkte ausreichen. Meine Lösungvorschläge sind unter den Sätzen zu lesen.

Es geht um folgende Übungsätze:

1)
Übungssatz:
Patients they suffer from common arthrisitc can be treated using heat, physical therapy, and aspirin.
Meine Korrektur:
Patients which suffer from common arthrisitc can be treated using heat, physical therapy, and aspirin.
Lösung: Personalpronomen wird zu Relativpronomen.

2)
The modern racing bicycle is cafefully engineered for safety, lightness, and reliable.
The modern racing bicycle is cafefully engineered for safety, lightness, and reliability.
Lösung: Adjektiv wird zu zum Nomen.

3)
Because, glass objecs are fragile, least have survived from ancient civilizations.
Because, glass objecs are fragile, less/litte have survived from ancient civilizations.
Lösung: least zu less

4)
The scale of the demographic change that are now occurring and that are projected for the near future is unprecedented in huma history.
The scale of the demographic changes that are now occurring and that are projected for the near future is unprecedented in huma history.
Lösung: Singular zu Plural.

5)
One basic principle of international air law recognize a country's complete sovereignty over the airspace above its territory.
One basic principle of international air law recognizance a country's complete sovereignty over the airspace above its territory.
Lösung: Verb zu Nomen.

6)
Between the high and low tidemarks of marine coasts existing abundant and varied plant and animal life.
Between the high and low tidemarks of marine coasts existence abundant and varied plant and animal life.
Lösung: Adjektiv zu Nomen.

Und bei zwei Sätzen, weiß ich einfach nicht die richtige Lösung. Bitte um einen Tip.

7)
Lubrication is essential in machinery because if the moving part of machine come into direct contact with each other, friction interferces with motion.

8)
It may take several hundred years to build inch of topsoil.

Danke

[Delfino]

1)
Patients they suffer from common arthrisitc can be treated using heat, physical therapy, and aspirin.

Patients who suffer from common arthritis can be treated using heat, physical therapy, and aspirin.


2)
The modern racing bicycle is cafefully engineered for safety, lightness, and reliable.

The modern racing bicycle is carefully engineered for safety, lightness, and reliability.
3)
Because, glass objecs are fragile, least have survived from ancient civilizations.

Because, glass objects are fragile, only few have survived from ancient civilisations.


4)
The scale of the demographic change that are now occurring and
that are projected for the near future is unprecedented in huma history.

The scale of the demographic changes that are now occurring and
that are projected for the near future is unprecedented in human history.


5)
One basic principle of international air law recognize a country's complete sovereignty
over the airspace above its territory.

One basic principle of international air law recognises a country's complete sovereignty
over the airspace above its territory.

6)
Between the high and low tidemarks of marine coasts existing abundant and varied plant and animal life.

Between the high and low tidemarks of marine coasts exists abundant and varied plant and animal life.
7)
Lubrication is essential in machinery
because if the moving part of machine come into direct contact with each other, friction interferces with motion.

Lubrication is essential in machinery
because if the moving parts of a machine come into direct contact with each other, friction interferes with motion.

8)
It may take several hundred years to build inch of topsoil.

It may take several hundred years to build an inch of topsoil.

Unless you plan to go to America, it is odd to use an American test
to document your English skills as you have been taught British English.

[slope]

Thank you very much for you help, and sorry for my slips in the sentences.

My University demands this test in my Bachelor Program. I don't consider to go to America or Britian. Not for the moment.

Would you or someone be so kind as check five more sentences, please.

An important effect that criticism can have on contemporary poets is the assurance that there is a growing interest their work.
An important effect that criticism can have on contemporary poets is the assurance that there is a growing interest of their work.
Approach: Missing preposition

Lillian Gish is best known for her roles in such silently films as The Birth of a Nation and Broken Blossoms.
Lillian Gish is best known for her roles in such mutely films as The Birth of a Nation and Broken Blossoms.
Approach: Wrong word

In exchange for requiring them to disclose the workings of their inventions, patents give inventors temporary, legally monopolies.
In exchange for requiring them to disclose the workings of their inventions, patents give inventors temporary, lawfully/legal monopolies.
Approach: Wrong word

Oraibi, Arizona, built by the Hopi Indians during 1100's, is probably the oldest continuous inhabited settlement in the United States.
Oraibi, Arizona, built by the Hopi Indians during 1100's, is probably the oldest continuously inhabited settlement in the United States.
Approach:adj->adv

No idea what is wrong here:
The paintings of artist Abraham Rattner are noted for their brilliant color, rich texture, and symbolic.
?Missing word after symbolic?

Thats it! No more questions . Thanks

[Duckduck (Contributor)]

Thank you very much for you help, and sorry for my slips in the sentences.

My University demands this test in my Bachelor Program. I don't consider to go to America or Britian. Not for the moment.

Would you or someone be so kind as to check five more sentences, please. Sure, why not!

An important effect that criticism can have on contemporary poets is the assurance that there is a growing interest their work.
An important effect that criticism can have on contemporary poets is the assurance that there is a growing interest in their work.
Approach: Missing preposition Correct, but yours was the wrong one

Lillian Gish is best known for her roles in such silently films as The Birth of a Nation and Broken Blossoms.
Lillian Gish is best known for her roles in such silent films as The Birth of a Nation and Broken Blossoms.
Approach: Wrong word, no, the word was correct but it should be an adjective

In exchange for requiring them to disclose the workings of their inventions, patents give inventors temporary, legally monopolies.
In exchange for requiring them to disclose the workings of their inventions, patents give inventors temporary, lawfully/legal monopolies.
Approach: Wrong word, no, word is correct, but should be an adjective (your second idea was OK)

Oraibi, Arizona, built by the Hopi Indians during 1100's, is probably the oldest continuous inhabited settlement in the United States.
Oraibi, Arizona, built by the Hopi Indians during 1100's, is probably the oldest continuously inhabited settlement in the United States.
Approach:adj->adv

No idea what is wrong here:
The paintings of artist Abraham Rattner are noted for their brilliant color, rich texture, and symbolism.
?Missing word after symbolic? no, just change it into a noun

Thats it! No more questions . Thanks

Grüße
Duckduck