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[ta2904]

Hallo, ich brauche schnellstmöglich eine Korrektur:



Travelling is the best school one could have. With my strong desire to learn I discoverd a lot of similarities and differences between cultures, race and religions on five continents.





Danke im Voraus !

[Keswick (Contributor)]

Hallo, ich brauche schnellstmöglich eine Korrektur:



Travelling is the best school one could have. With my strong desire to learn I discovered a lot of similarities and differences between cultures, races and religions on five continents.





Danke im Voraus !

[tiorthan]

Besser: I have discovered