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sFanta

Bitte um Korrektur von Grammatik und Rechtschreibfehler ;)

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Hallo :) Ich schreibe nächste Woche die letzte Englisch Arbeit. In der Arbeit geht es drum einen kleinen Text zu schreiben über unseren Lieblings TV Programm und ich bin mir nicht so sicher ob der Text gut ist. Hier ist mein Text:

My favorite TV programme is Pranked it's on the channel Viva at 00:35 pm every saturday. Pranked is a comedy show from the US. In Pranked are two moderators they talking about the pranks from the internet (Youtube...) and show us them the pranks and the moderators often humilate themselves. The names from the moderators are Amir Blumenfeld and Streeter Saidell. Pranked is a 30 minutes show but in Viva are two episode in a row. They talks in english but with a german subtitle. It dosen't have a story but in Pranked are show us pranks from guys in the internet they prank her/his friends, family, roommates or school friends. It is my favorite TV programme because it's a really funny show I laugh many about the pranks and the humiliates from the moderators. My friends watch Pranked too and they like it we often talk about the last episode and laugh toghter.

Vielen dank für's lesen und korrigieren :spin:

Azzurri

Re: Bitte um Korrektur von Grammatik und Rechtschreibfehler

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Ich probiere mal mein Glück, weil ich selbst noch lerne :D
sFanta hat geschrieben:
My favorite TV channel is Pranked it's on the channel Viva at 00:35 pm every Saturday. Pranked is a comedy show from the USA. In Pranked are two moderators and they (always) talking about the pranks from the Internet (e. g. Youtube...) and show it. The moderators often humiliate themselves. The names from the moderators are Amir Blumenfeld and Streeter Saidell. Pranked is a 30 minutes show, but on Viva there are two episode in a row. They talks in English, but with a German subtitle.
It dosen't have a story, but in Pranked they show us pranks from people on the Internet they prank their friends, family, roommates or school friends. It is my favorite TV channel because it's a really funny show and I laugh much about the pranks and the humiliates from the moderators. My friends watch Pranked, too, and they like it. We often talk about the last episode and laugh toghter.


I hope you will understand my correction.

Best regards,
Azzurri

Keswick (Contributor)

Re: Bitte um Korrektur von Grammatik und Rechtschreibfehler

Beitrag von Keswick (Contributor) »

Correcting just a few issues :)
Azzurri hat geschrieben:Ich probiere mal mein Glück, weil ich selbst noch lerne :D
sFanta hat geschrieben:
My favorite TV show is Pranked it's on the channel Viva at 00:35 pm every Saturday. Pranked is a comedy show from the USA. In Pranked are two hosts and they (always) talking about the pranks from the Internet (e. g. Youtube...) and show them. The hosts often humiliate themselves. The names of the hosts are Amir Blumenfeld and Streeter Saidell. Pranked is a 30-minutes show, but on Viva there are two episode in a row. They talks in English, but with a German subtitles.
It doesn't have a story-line, but in Pranked they show us pranks from people on the Internet who play pranks on their friends, family, roommates or school friends. It is my favorite TV show because it's a really funny show and I laugh a lot about the pranks and the humiliation of the hosts. My friends watch Pranked, too, and they like it. We often talk about the last episode and laugh together.

I hope you will understand my correction.

Best regards,
Azzurri
I find the word humiliation a bit harsh. Try to find a better one.