Ich benöte ein fließenden Lebenslauf auf englisch für ein Austauschprogramm und möchte gerne wissen ob das so gut geschrieben ist:
I was born in a village named Gronau (Westfalen). During my schooldays I was very interested
in natural sciences, and for many years I was engaged in an Environmental Science
Club. Within the Environmental Science Club, among other things, we planted
trees, maintained gardens, visited sewage plants, kept bees, and sold organic honey. Basically, we have dealt with all that helps protect the environment.
During my Abitur (Highschool) at Werner von Siemens Gymnasium in 2006-2009
I discovered my talents in maths and physics. By studying hard, I developed this talent and have also succesfully participated in mathematics competitions like Bundeswettbewerb Mathematik. Furthermore, I received an award in physics from the Deutsche Physikalische Gesellschaft (German Physical Society) for my Highschool certificate. As they often had trouble with understanding the content of maths lessons, I offered my classmates tuition in mathematics each afternoon. This also helped me develop teaching skills. Moreover, I worked in a storage of fruit and vegetable of a supermarket chain to finance my studies in Berlin.
Having always been interested in mathematics and science, I began my studies in engineering mathematics at the TU Berlin in October 2009. As my minor subject I chose energy technology, and have specialized in the field of thermodynamics due to the fact that the development in renewable energy systems is very important for the next generations. I hope to contribute in renewable energy systems. Currently, I am finishing my bachelor studies and preparing my bachelor thesis on semilinear elliptic problems and the mountain pass theorem, based on a seminal paper of Brezis and Nirenberg. This is a advanced topic in the field of differential equations, which I chose as my major subject. Furthermore, this semester I enrolled in Differential Equation III and Quantum Mechanics as graduate courses for my master's degree.
In August 2012, I had an internship at the Collaborative Research Center/Transregio
63 at the faculty of Dynamics and Operation of technical Facilities for six weeks.
This Collaborative Research Center is a research project of the Deutsche Forschungsgemeinschaft (DFG, German Research Foundation), and is engaged in the development of efficient production processes, based on chemical reactions in liquid multiphase systems. Within the project, I worked in the modelling and simulation area.
Curriculum Vitae-Ich bitte euch mir zu sagen ob dadrin Fehle
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Delfino
Re: Curriculum Vitae-Ich bitte euch mir zu sagen ob dadrin F
Wie immer ist es zur Verbesserung der Struktur und Gliederung des Inhalts wichtigKlute123 hat geschrieben:Ich benötige für ein Austauschprogramm einen englischen Lebenslauf
und möchte gerne wissen ob das so gut geschrieben ist:
sich ein paar Gedanken zu machen:
1) Warum ließt der Leser deinen Text?
Was könnte ihm wichtig sein und was ist eher uninteressant?
2) Welches Bild (von dir) möchtest du beim Leser erzeugen?
3) Natürlich ist das nicht immer leicht und es macht natürlich Sinn
andere Leute, um Hilfe zu bitten.
Aber dafür must du ihnen möglichst viele Rahmeninformationen geben,
damit sie sich in deine Situation hineinversetzen können...
Eine deutsche Version deines Textes ist immer dann hilfreich
wenn es bei der Übersetzung des Inhalts zu Fehlern kam.
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Delfino
Re: Curriculum Vitae-Ich bitte euch mir zu sagen ob dadrin F
I was born in a village named Gronau (Westfalen).
In my childhood I was very interested in natural sciences,
and for many years I was engaged in an Environmental Science Club.
Among other things, we planted trees, maintained gardens, visited sewage plants, kept bees, and sold organic honey.
Basically, we have been involved with many tasks to help protect the environment.
I discovered my talents in maths and physics, while studying to earn my Abitur (A-levels) at the Werner von Siemens Gymnasium (2006 - 2009).
My thorough studies allowed me to build on my skills and to successfully participate in national math competitions like the Bundeswettbewerb Mathematik.
Furthermore, I received an award in physics from the Deutsche Physikalische Gesellschaft (German Physical Society) for my high school graduation certificate.
In the afternoon I often offered my classmates private tuition in mathematics as they had trouble to understand the content of our maths lessons.
Over time this also helped me to develop teaching skills.
Moreover, I worked in the storage area for fruits and vegetables of a supermarket chain to finance my studies in Berlin.
Having always been interested in mathematics and science, I began my studies in Technomathematics at the University of Technology Berlin in October 2009.
Currently, I am finishing my bachelor studies and preparing my bachelor thesis in the field of differential equations, my major subject.
My thesis is focused on an advanced topic of semi-linear elliptic problems and the mountain pass theorem, based on the work of Brezis and Nirenberg.
As my minor subject I chose Energy Technology, and I have specialised in the field of thermodynamics.
In the future I hope to contribute to efficient renewable energy systems, because their development is very important for us and the generations to come.
Furthermore, this semester I enrolled in Differential Equation III and Quantum Mechanics as graduate courses for my master's degree.
In August 2012, I had a six-week internship at the Collaborative Research Center/Transregio 63.
This is a research project of the Deutsche Forschungsgemeinschaft (DFG, German Research Foundation),
and it is engaged in the development of efficient production processes, based on chemical reactions in liquid multiphase systems.
Within the project, I worked in the modelling and simulation area.
In my childhood I was very interested in natural sciences,
and for many years I was engaged in an Environmental Science Club.
Among other things, we planted trees, maintained gardens, visited sewage plants, kept bees, and sold organic honey.
Basically, we have been involved with many tasks to help protect the environment.
I discovered my talents in maths and physics, while studying to earn my Abitur (A-levels) at the Werner von Siemens Gymnasium (2006 - 2009).
My thorough studies allowed me to build on my skills and to successfully participate in national math competitions like the Bundeswettbewerb Mathematik.
Furthermore, I received an award in physics from the Deutsche Physikalische Gesellschaft (German Physical Society) for my high school graduation certificate.
In the afternoon I often offered my classmates private tuition in mathematics as they had trouble to understand the content of our maths lessons.
Over time this also helped me to develop teaching skills.
Moreover, I worked in the storage area for fruits and vegetables of a supermarket chain to finance my studies in Berlin.
Having always been interested in mathematics and science, I began my studies in Technomathematics at the University of Technology Berlin in October 2009.
Currently, I am finishing my bachelor studies and preparing my bachelor thesis in the field of differential equations, my major subject.
My thesis is focused on an advanced topic of semi-linear elliptic problems and the mountain pass theorem, based on the work of Brezis and Nirenberg.
As my minor subject I chose Energy Technology, and I have specialised in the field of thermodynamics.
In the future I hope to contribute to efficient renewable energy systems, because their development is very important for us and the generations to come.
Furthermore, this semester I enrolled in Differential Equation III and Quantum Mechanics as graduate courses for my master's degree.
In August 2012, I had a six-week internship at the Collaborative Research Center/Transregio 63.
This is a research project of the Deutsche Forschungsgemeinschaft (DFG, German Research Foundation),
and it is engaged in the development of efficient production processes, based on chemical reactions in liquid multiphase systems.
Within the project, I worked in the modelling and simulation area.