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Kurzreferat Korrektur?

Beitrag von letstalk___ »

Hallo Leute, ich muss am Montag ein Kurzreferat halten. Ich habe mich für das Thema Madame Tussauds entschieden.  
 
Ich weiss es ist ziemlich viel verlangt, aber es wäre sehr freundlich von euch, wenn ihr kurz einen Blick auf meinen Text werfen würdet :-)
 
Habe ich irgendwelche Fehler gemacht? Rechtschreibung, Grammatik?  
 
It takes three to six months to make each wax figure. It all begins with the measurement. The person, who is going to be sculptured, has to be measured. There are more than 200 measurements, which are needed to create a wax figure. The artists of Madame Tussauds measure every single part of the body, it is really important to measure everything really exactly. Here you can see how the artists of Madame Tussauds measure the face of Angelina Jolie.

After the artists took the measurement, they start to make a metal armature, which is really important for bringing the clay in the right shape of the body. At the same time, another artist starts to sculpt the head. The clay process takes about five weeks.

After the clay process, the moulding begins.
A special plaster mould is made for the clay body. They put the clay body and the plaster mould together and outpour them with hot wax. After the wax is dry, they remove the plaster mould.

After the moulding, the colouring begins. The artists of Madame Tussauds always try to hit the right colour of the eyes, hair and skin. They mix a ton of different colours together, so if a person has brown hair or brown eyes, they hit the exact shade of brown.
After that, the sculpture is ready to get dressed, and after the dressing, the sculpture can be showed on the exhibition of Madame Tussauds.


Das ist natürlich nicht der ganze Vortrag, sondern nur der Teil, in dem ich erkläre wie die Figuren entstehen, also der Teil in dem ich mir von der Grammatik, usw. unsicher bin :/

Danke für eure Hilfe!!!:lol: :lol:

Keswick (Contributor)

Re: Kurzreferat Korrektur?

Beitrag von Keswick (Contributor) »

letstalk___ hat geschrieben:Hallo Leute, ich muss am Montag ein Kurzreferat halten. Ich habe mich für das Thema Madame Tussauds entschieden.

Ich weiss es ist ziemlich viel verlangt, aber es wäre sehr freundlich von euch, wenn ihr kurz einen Blick auf meinen Text werfen würdet :-)

Habe ich irgendwelche Fehler gemacht? Rechtschreibung, Grammatik?

It takes three to six months to make each wax figure. It all begins with the measurement. The person, who is going to be sculptured, has to be measured. There are more than 200 measurements, which are needed to create a wax figure. The artists of Madame Tussauds measure every single part of the body, it is really important to measure everything really exactly. Here you can see how the artists of Madame Tussauds measure the face of Angelina Jolie.

After the artists took the measurement, they start to make a metal armature, which is really important for modelling the clay into the correct body shape. At the same time, another artist starts to sculpt the head. The clay process takes about five weeks.

After the clay process, the moulding begins.
A special plaster mould is made for the clay body. They put the clay body and the plaster mould together and fill them with hot wax. After the wax is dry, they remove the plaster mould.

After the moulding, the colouring begins. The artists of Madame Tussauds always try to hit the right colour of the eyes, hair and skin. They mix a lot of different colours together, so if a person has brown hair or brown eyes, they hit the exact shade of brown.
After that, the sculpture is ready to be dressed, and after the dressing, the sculpture can be shown on the exhibition of Madame Tussauds.


Das ist natürlich nicht der ganze Vortrag, sondern nur der Teil, in dem ich erkläre wie die Figuren entstehen, also der Teil in dem ich mir von der Grammatik, usw. unsicher bin :/

Danke für eure Hilfe!!!:lol: :lol:

Jetzt habe ich wieder etwas gelernt, danke! :)

letstalk___

Re: Kurzreferat Korrektur?

Beitrag von letstalk___ »

Vielen lieben Dank für deine Korrektur!! Du hast mich gerettet :D !!