ich versuche mich momentan an einem Motivationsschreiben um irgendwo im Ausland auf einer Farm oder mit Tieren zu arbeiten. Da ich leider noch nicht genau weiß, wohin es gehen soll ist in meinem Motivationsschreiben kein Land erwähnt. Meine Beraterin vom Jugendamt meinte, sie stellt das in ein internationales Netzwerk, weshalb hier auch alles allgemein formuliert wurde und nicht explizit in welchem Land/auf welcher Farm o.ä.
Wäre sehr nett, wenn sich einer meinem Schreiben annehmen würde, da mein Englisch hier mit Sicherheit Lücken hat
Vielen Dank schon mal im Vorraus
:Dear Sir or Madam,
I would like to introduce myself as a proper candidate for working on farms or helping animals in every way.
my name is ***, I’m 19 years old and I come from the southwest of Germany. I will graduate school in June 2013 with the Abitur, which is equivalent to the A-level.
Since at least six years it is my dream to spend some time in a foreign country after I finished school and this has different reasons.
First of all I’m a person who’s very interested in getting to know new countries and cultures. That’s because I’m open-minded and I have no problem adapting to new situations, be in a new lifestyle or a new environment (Umfeld?).
Since I have never been on a different continent I would now like to look at a wider picture and dive into the fascinating world.
I love animals since I am a child wherefore (weshalb?) I have three rabbits on my own.
Furthermore I want to work in a different country because I would like to take the chance to improve my English skills and the best opportunity to do this is, in my opinion, spending some time in an English-speaking country. I’ve always been interested in languages. Besides German and English I speak a bit French.
In addition to that, I want to earn knowledge and come in contact with a new unknown culture, people and environment. I also am interested in bringing my country, culture and lifestyle nearer to other persons if they want me to do that.
Ich möchte mein eigenes Wissen über die Welt und ihre Kulturen erweitern und dabei auch mich selbst besser kennen lernen. Zusätzlich gibt mir ein Auslandsaufenthalt die Möglichkeit, meinen späteren Berufsweg zu überdenken und eventuell einen anderen Weg zu gehen.
You are surely eagerly interested in getting to know me better, so I will give you some information about me, my interests and my personality.
I’m a frank boy, who enjoys being with family and friends.
In my leisure time I like to do sport very much. I’m not specialized on one single form of sport because I’m interested in all kinds. I like swimming, handball, running and I am open to every new game. So I can say that I’m an athletic person who likes to be outdoors.
If it’s cold or rainy, I spend a lot of time with reading books and being on the internet.
Another interest of me is travelling. Fortunately, my parents are also passionate travellers and so I had the opportunity to visit many different countries, for example France, Croatia, Great Britain, Belgium, Denmark and Spain.
Now some information about my character.
I can say that I am a polite and friendly person. I’m unbiased towards every new situation or person, or better, I welcome those new experiences with arms wide open cause I‘ve always been very adventurous. I’m also reliable and responsible, I take my tasks seriously and I‘m ambitious enough to make the best of it. In addition, when talking about my personality, it has to be mentioned that I’m honest and frank, even tough I am a little bit shy. Furthermore I’m a calm and mature person. And last but not least, I’m very patient.
I (bin bereit) work hard and to sort things out.Mein Interesse während dem Auslandsaufenthalt liegt darin, vor Ort der Umwelt und den Tieren gutes zu tun, sie zu pflegen und zu schützen.Furthermore I would like to repeat, that I am interested in a new culture and people.
I hope my letter has, in any way, convinced you that I fit perfectly into any job in the area of working on farms and with animals.
Don’t hesitate to write me if you would like to get to know me or if you have further questions. I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
***
