ich bewerbe mich um ein Auslandssemester in USA und muss ein Motivationsschreiben anfertigen. Ich wäre euch sehr dankbar, wenn ihr dieses einmal überfliegen könnten und Kritik und Anregung äußert. Vielen Dank!
Dear Sir or Madame,
My name is Max Mustermann, I am 22 years old and I have been studying computer science at the XY University of Applied Science in Musterstadt, Germany for four semesters. In summer 2014 I going to graduate with a Bachelor of Science.
My personal motivation for my studies began with my training as an IT specialist in 2005 in the company Musterfirma GmbH in München, Germany. I gained there much experience in the area of computer science and international customers.
Since I have never been on a different continent and my first time abroad has been within Europe, I would now like to look at a wider picture and dive into the fascinating world of American Way of Life. I think it is the most efficient and successful method to improve my English and computer skills.
That is one of the reasons why I decided to broaden my horizon and go abroad for a semester.
If I set myself a goal I work as hard as I can to achieve it. Only with hard work one can make everything possible. In addition I am very communicative, sociable and creative. I would be very grateful if you considered my application and gave me a chance to participate in your Bachelor program, which would mark my future professional and personal development.
Thank you very much in advanced for your consideration.
Yours sincerly,
When do you want to start there?