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E-Text Kontrolle! Homework!

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Hallo liebe E-Community!

Ich muss diesen Text als E-Homework schreiben und bitte euch das Word kurz auf Fehler zu überprüfen.

Danke vielmals!

LG Christian


E Homework:
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Our business idea was a pizza delivery service. The name of our company is “Easy Pizzi Flitzi” which stands for fast and high quality pizza. We have chosen our headquarters near the roundabout to guarantee fast and prompt delivery in and near Vienna.
This would be the perfect place to reach every part within Austria in short time, because there is a motorway access to the A-23, which is the most important motorway in Vienna.
Our pizza company stands for high quality and fast delivery, remaining with a still purchasable price. I think it’s very important to stand aloof from the usual pizza companies. Our assortment includes only typical Italian pizzas like margarita, spinach, cardinal and diavolo.
Customers can order pizzas by telephone or via internet. There they can also see various information’s about their order like delivery time, calories or special pizza action.
One marketing strategy would be special colored service clothing delivery personal in red/yellow wearing a cap that looks like a Pizza. Another strategy would be different kinds of quantity discounts.
If you have any questions, please do not hesitate to contact me ;-)

Keswick (Contributor)

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Christian_18181 hat geschrieben: E Homework:
E-Homework
Our business idea was a pizza delivery service. The name of our company is “Easy Pizzi Flitzi” which stands for fast and high quality pizza. We have chosen our headquarters to be located close to a roundabout to guarantee fast and prompt delivery in and around Vienna.
This would be the perfect place to reach every part of Austria in a short time, because there is a motorway access to the A-23, which is the most important motorway in Vienna.
Our pizza company stands for high quality and fast delivery, while keeping prices at an affordable level. I think it’s very important to stand out from the usual pizza companies. Our assortment includes only typical Italian pizzas like Margarita, spinach, Cardinal and Diavolo.
Customers can order pizzas by telephone or via internet. There they can also find details about their order such as delivery time, calories as well as special pizza promotions.
One marketing strategy would be special colored service clothing, delivery personal in red/yellow wearing a cap that looks like a Pizza. Another strategy would be different kinds of quantity discounts.
If you have any questions, please do not hesitate to contact me ;-)

I consider Margarita, Cardinal and Diavolo a brand name, hence the capitalisation. Spinach however is a flavour and should not be capitalised.
And I am not sure whether dressing delivery drivers in red and yellow and moreover making them wear a pizza-shaped head is actually legal.. :mrgreen: