Empfehlungsschreiben Master in England

[ihg]

Hallo Zusammen,

für meine Bewerbung an einer sehr angesehenen englischen Universität benötige ich mehrere Empfehlungsschreiben. Seid ihr so nett und schaut mal über dieses drüber. Wäre euch sehr dankbar.

Beste Grüße
ihg



**, 4 March 2013
Letter of recommendation for Mr. ***
As an outstanding bachelor graduate, dedicated student and head of the students union with great commitment at ***, I recommend ***, born on ****** in *** as a part of his application for a postgraduate programme in psychology at ***. *** filled me with enthusiasm because of his excellent academic performance and his outstanding personal qualifications.

I got to know Mr. *** in my position as associate Dean of the ***, one of the leading business schools in Germany according to numerous independent rankings. The hands-on management education at *** is international and practical oriented. Because of the small capacity and high number of applicants, we have to be highly selective. Already at the selection process Mr. *** stood out in a very positive manner. During his studies he distinguished himself in an exceptional good understanding of complex business matters and an extensive expertise in Marketing and Consumer Neuroscience. His very good examination results show his ambition to achieve self-set goals.
During the entire study, Mr. *** caught my attention by his exceptionally high social competences and his great extracurricular activities. As elected head of the student council for four semesters he connected the student body with the university management including president, dean and chancellor. While organizing and launching our international buddy programme for new incoming students, Mr. *** proofed intercultural sensitivity and awareness. Furthermore he arranged several voluntary projects including “*** Tafel e.V.” which provide homeless people and supply them with food.
Due to his open and friendly personality *** is not only popular with students -demonstrating excellent teamwork and communication skills - but also with employees of my chair.

I highly recommend *** for a Master's degree at the *** and I wish him all the best. Please do not hesitate to contact me for further questions concerning ***´s qualifications.

Yours sincerely

***
Associate Dean

[Delfino]

Letter of recommendation for Mr. ***
As an outstanding bachelor graduate, dedicated student and former Head of the Students Union with great commitment at ***, I recommend ***, born on ****** in *** as a part of his application for a postgraduate programme in psychology at ***. *** filled me with enthusiasm because of his excellent academic performance and his outstanding personal qualifications.

I got to know Mr. *** in my position as Associate Dean of the ***, one of the leading business schools in Germany according to numerous independent rankings. The hands-on management education at *** is international and practical oriented. Because of the small capacity and high number of applicants, we have to be highly selective. Already at the selection process Mr. *** stood out in a very positive manner. During his studies he distinguished himself in an exceptional good understanding of complex business matters and an extensive expertise in Marketing and Consumer Neuroscience. His very good exam results show his ambition to achieve self-set goals.
During the entire course of his studies, Mr. *** caught my attention by his exceptionally high social competence and his great extracurricular activities. As the elected Head of the Student Council for four semesters he connected the student body with the university management including president, dean and chancellor. While organizing and launching our international buddy programme for new incoming students, Mr. *** proofed intercultural sensitivity and awareness. Furthermore, he arranged several voluntary projects including the “*** Tafel e.V.” which provides homeless people and supply them with food.
Due to his open and friendly personality *** is not only popular with students - demonstrating excellent teamwork and communication skills, but also with employees of my chair.

I highly recommend *** for your Master's degree programme at the *** and I wish him all the best.
Please do not hesitate to contact me for further questions concerning ***'s qualifications.
Yours sincerely,
***
Associate Dean

Your text includes some very long sentences (e.g. first paragraph)
and a few expressions are repeatedly used.

Now that you've collected all the information you want to include
you'll have to work on the improvement of the English version.

[Delfino]

Letter of recommendation for Mr. ***

***, born on *** in *** is one of our outstanding bachelor graduates and the former Head of the Students Union
at ***. He was a dedicated student with great commitment in coursework and extra curricula activities.
His enthusiasm led to excellent academic performance, and his outstanding personal qualifications made us proud too.
Therefore, I wholeheartedly recommend him for a postgraduate programme in psychology.I got to know Mr. *** in my position as Associate Dean of the ***, one of the leading business schools in Germany according to numerous independent rankings.
Our hands-on management education at *** is international and practical oriented. Our small cohorts and the high number of applicants allow us to be highly selective.
From the beginning of the selection process Mr. *** stood out in a very positive way. This continued during his studies he distinguished himself with an exceptionally
good understanding of complex business matters and an extensive expertise in Marketing and Consumer Neuroscience. His very good exam results show his ambition
to achieve ambitious self-set goals.

Throughout the entire course of his studies, Mr. *** caught my attention by demonstrating his exceptionally high social competence and many extracurricular activities.
For four semesters he wasthe elected Head of the Student Council and as such connected the student body with the university management including the President,
the Dean(s?) and the Chancellor. While launching and organizing our international buddy programme for new incoming students, Mr. *** proofed his intercultural sensitivity
and awareness. Furthermore, he arranged several voluntary projects including the “*** Tafel e.V.”, a registered non-profit society which provides homeless people with food.
Due to his open and friendly personality *** is not only popular with students - demonstrating excellent teamwork and communication skills, but also with employees of
my chair.

I highly recommend *** for your Master's degree programme at *** and I wish him all the best in his future endeavours.
Please do not hesitate to contact me for further questions concerning ***'s qualifications.
Yours sincerely,
***
Associate Dean

Copy and paste from a word processing program is not perfect for editing/correcting here in the forum.
Please keep an eye on the font and font size. I suggest to use Notepad to remove the text format
before posting.

[ihg]

Vielen Dank für die Hilfe. So ist es wesentlich besser, besonders der erste Paragraph. Perfekt!
Vielleicht findet jemand noch Zeit über das zweite Schreiben zu schauen.

Danke euch und beste Grüße
IHG


Letter of Recommendation February 16, 2013

To whom it may concern,

I am writing this letter of recommendation on behalf of *** as part of his application for the Master of Science Conversion to Psychology programme at ***.

I got to know *** in my position as programme director “***” at the ***. *** attended my courses in Corporate Communication, Marketing, Media Management and Public Relations where he consistently demonstrated the highest level of academic output among his fellow students. Apart from providing excellent analytical and creative participation in class, he passed all exams with outstanding grades (1.0/1.3). His results in other courses, too, were excellent, and he almost performed in the top 5% of the classes he is in.

*** is very reliable, helpful and well-organised. Furthermore, due to his professional experience at *** and *** beside his studies, he gained quantitative skills in scope of financial issues as well as presentation skills. When *** was asked to lead a seminar as part of his assessment, he had a confident manner and clear speaking voice and was able to disseminate difficult concepts in a way that ensured audience members could grasp them. He accomplished all these tasks with great initiative, motivation and a very positive attitude.

In my opinion, *** has an array of strengths to offer. He demonstrated excellent organizational skills, has outstanding written as well as verbal communication skills, and is extremely organized, reliable and helpful. His ability to lead successfully was shown each time he volunteered to be team leader of a research group and he was able to solve any problems encountered quickly and effectively while listening to others. He is a friendly, bright and motivated individual who is always willing to learn and develop. Therefore, I have absolutely no hesitation whatsoever in recommending him to your university as an extremely suitable student for postgraduate studies. I am sure he will provide to be a credit to both our institutions.

If you have any further questions with regard to his background or qualifications, please do not hesitate to contact me.
Kind regards,

***
Programme director,
***

[Delfino]

16th February 2013

Letter of Recommendation

To whom it may concern,

I am writing this letter of recommendation on behalf of *** as part of his application for the
Master of Science Conversion to Psychology programme at ***.

I got to know *** in my position as the Programme Director of “***” at the ***. *** attended my courses
in Corporate Communication, Marketing, Media Management and Public Relations where he consistently demonstrated
the highest level of academic output among his fellow students. Apart from providing excellent analytical and
creative participation in class, he passed all exams with outstanding grades (1.0/1.3). His results in other courses were also excellent,
and he usually performed in the top 5% of his classes.

*** is very reliable, helpful and well-organised. Beside his studies he gained professional experience
at *** and *** which enabled him to gain further quantitative skills in scope of financial issues as well as
presentation skills.

Furthermore, when *** was asked to lead a seminar as part of his assessment, he agreed without hesitation.
With his confident manner and clear speaking voice he was able to communicate difficult concepts in a way
that ensured audience members could grasp them. He accomplished all these tasks with great initiative,
motivation and a very positive attitude.

In my opinion, *** has an array of strengths to offer. He demonstrated excellent organizational skills,
has outstanding written as well as verbal communication skills, and is extremely organized, reliable and helpful.
His ability to lead successfully was shown each time he volunteered to be team leader of a research group
and he was able to solve any problems encountered quickly and effectively while listening to others.
He is a friendly, bright and motivated individual who is always willing to learn and develop. Therefore,
I have absolutely no hesitation whatsoever in recommending him to your university as an extremely
suitable student for postgraduate studies. I am sure he will proof to be a credit to both our institutions.

If you have any further questions with regard to his background or qualifications,
please do not hesitate to contact me.

Kind regards,

***

Programme Director
***

[Delfino]

This continued during his studies, he distinguished himself with an exceptionally
good understanding of complex business matters and an extensive expertise in Marketing and Consumer Neuroscience.

Furthermore, when *** was asked to lead a seminar as part of his assessment, he agreed swiftly.

I am sure,
he will prove to be a credit to both (of) our institutions.