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[atkinson]

Hallo!
Ich habe einen Text geschrieben und möchte gern um eine Korrektur bitten.


Unfortunately, the enlightement is not widely received. But with monotheism we are already on the right track: From Ra and Shiva, to to Zeus and Jupiter, to Thor and Odin and all their side and lower gods's it's important to recognize only one god as pure work of man and to abolish him. Islam, Judaism and Christianity differ from atheism in just one God. To me it seems not to be an insurmountable obstacle.

Vielen Dank im Vorraus..

[tiorthan]

Ich verstehe nicht, was du aussagen willst.

[Delfino]

I guess, it's something along these lines:

Monotheists believe their god is the one, and all other gods are fake.
All atheists have done is taken it one step further... All gods are fake.

[tiorthan]

Basically, that's what I got from it as wall, but then, as an atheist, that's what I wish all people would learn to see. However, my problem is that I cannot be sure.

Monotheists believe their god is the one, and all other gods are fake.
All atheists have done is taken it one step further... All gods are fake.

Very close to what I once told some christian "fanatic"*. My actual word were "You don't believe in Zeus or Odin or Shiva, well, I just believe in one god less than you."