The Simpsons

[MehmetKaratas]

Hallo Leute,

ich präsentiere in der Schule die Simpsons.
Ich brauche eine gute Note und bin deswegen mit dem Satzbau etwas unsicher. Könntet ihr euch den folgenden Text ansehen und ihn dann eventuell korrigieren? Das wäre super von euch. Ich bedanke mich schon mal im Voraus.

Hier der Text:
History



James L. Brooks was by the Comic series Life in Hell on Matt Groening alert. He called Groening and ask him if he can something draw for the Tracey Ullman Show in the year1985. Groening shall have heard that he have to draw something new and strange at the meeting. So he have drew the figures in 15 minutes. He evolved spontaneous the idea for the series The Simpsons. The Simpsons was first broadcasted at the 19^th April 1987 as a short film in the Tracey Ullman Show. The figures were at the moment still crude designed. The idea from the telestation FOX to any serial built out in the year 1989. the series was in the first 3 stagger from the production company Klasky Csupo produced. Since the fourth therefore responsible the company Film Roman. The first broadcast in the German version was in the year 1991 from the german broadcaster ZDF and since 1994 on ProSieben. The Simpsons are in the USA the longest-lived Prime-Time-Series and they are the most successful Comic series. 1997 outstripped the Series the Flintstones in record for the longest running USA Comic series to the Prime Time and so they get an entry in the Guinness Book of Records. In the year 2009 was the Series for the longest running Sitcom and the Series with the most Emmy-Awards and with more Records and The Simpsons holds therefore four records.

[tiorthan]

Es tut mir leid, aber das ist nicht korrigierbar, du hast lediglich jedes deutsche Wort in ein englisches umgewandelt, und das auch oft genug noch falsch. Das Resultat ist für mich zumindest unverständlich.