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education1

Correction needed!

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Hello everybody!

I have a question concerning a sentence I have used in a test. My teacher has marked the following sentence as wrong. But I do not understand why? Asking her, was no use!


Comparing the reputation of theatre nowadays and at Shakespeare's time, one can easily recognise differences emerged due to a radical change.

Thank you very much in advance!

tiorthan

Re: Correction needed!

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That's what I'd change
education1 hat geschrieben: Comparing the reputation of theatre nowadays and at Shakespeare's time, one can easily recognise differences that have emerged due to a radical change.