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Introducing Yourself

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Hallo allesamt,
muss für die Berufsschule einen Text verfassen, in dem ich mich kurz vorstelle.
Gesagt - getan.
Wäre mir trotzdem lieber, wenn da nochmal jemand rüberschauen könnte, da mein letzter Englischunterricht schon einige Jahre zurück liegt.
Danke schonmal im voraus :)

Hello, I'm *** 21 years young and I live in Berlin, where I also was born.
Currently I still live with my parents, but within the last week I signed my lease for an apartment in Sprinpfuhl which is why I am realy busy with my removal.
Subsequent to my A level in 2010, I did my civilian service. In 2011 I moved to ***** in Lower Saxony, because of my chemistry studies in Oldenburg. But I realized, that I would never be happy with this decision.
So I moved back to Berlin and now I'm in an apprenticeship at ***** pipeline engineering with very good chances on an integrated degree program after my apprenticeship as a plant mechanic.
Later, I would like to travel around the world, learn more about other cultures, see the Northern Lights of Scandinavia and eat kimchi noodle soup in Japan, of course with chopsticks.

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Re: Introducing Yourself

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Woodstock hat geschrieben:Hallo allesamt,
muss für die Berufsschule einen Text verfassen, in dem ich mich kurz vorstelle.
Gesagt - getan.
Wäre mir trotzdem lieber, wenn da nochmal jemand rüberschauen könnte, da mein letzter Englischunterricht schon einige Jahre zurück liegt.
Danke schonmal im voraus :)

Hello, I'm *** 21 years old and I live in Berlin, where I also was born.
Currently I still live with my parents, but within the last week I signed my lease for an apartment in Sprinpfuhl which is why I am real
ly busy with my removal.
Subsequent to my A level in 2010, I did my civilian service. In 2011 I moved to ***** in Lower Saxony, because of my chemistry studies in Oldenburg. But I realized, that I would never be happy with this decision.
So I moved back to Berlin and now I'm in an apprenticeship at ***** pipeline engineering with very good chances of an integrated degree program (BrE = programme) after my apprenticeship as a plant mechanic.
Later, I would like to travel around the world, learn more about other cultures, see the Northern Lights of Scandinavia and eat kimchi noodle soup in Japan, of course with chopsticks.


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