Bewerbung Praxisphase USA

[student123german]

Hallo liebe Community,
ich schreibe momentan eine wichtige interne Bewerbung für einen 3 monatigen Aufenthalt in den USA.
Da es etwas länger her ist seit ich das letzte mal einen englischen Text geschrieben habe, wäre es klasse wenn sich jemand kurz die Zeit nehmen könnte!
Vielen vielen Dank!
Dear Mr ***,
a practical semester in the United States would bring a great benefit for myself and therefore of course for the company. For this reason I apply to the 3-month stay in the USA in Q2/2013.
From a linguistic point of view, it would correspond to a large degree with my own efforts during the last years: For the reason, that I could already gain a lot of linguistic experiences in school, in particular in Spanish, French and English, my purpose has always been to reach a continuous improvement of these skills. My Spanish vocabulary training and English online training, scheduled for next year, would be perfectly completed by the practical semester in the USA.
Moreover the illustrated tasks would match with my former professional achievements: During my previous career at xyz I was able to acquire various technical ABAP skills, for which reason the main task to program a report would fit perfectly.
Furthermore my experiences in understanding economical processes and my Spanish skills could be very helpful concerning the daily work and the communication with our customers in Latin America.
I look forward to your reply.

Sincerely yours,
***

[Delfino]

Dear Mr ***,

I am writing to express my interest in a 3 month internship in your US branch.
My studies of [Computer Science/Economics] (at XY University) [allow/require] me to gain further practical experience during the second quarter of 2013.

Before studying at [XY University] I worked at the [town/department] branch of [company name] (for ... [months/years]).
(Where) I enjoyed the many opportunities to [apply/extend] my knowledge of ... and learn about....
Additionally, I acquired various technical skills related to ABAP programming which match your job [description/profile].
Therefore, I am confident to be able to program the reports you require.

Moreover, since my linguistic traning at school I have made an effort to continously improve my English, Spanish and French skills on my own.
(And) I aim to continue (and complement) my Spanish and English online training during my time abroad next year.

Furthermore, my experience in understanding economic processes in combination with my Spanish skills could be very helpful [for/in] daily work and the communication with our customers in Latin America.

I appreciate your taking the time to review my credentials and experience.
Again, thank you for your consideration and I am looking forward to your reply.

Sincerely yours,
***

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