Kurze Korrektur

[harjon]

Hallo zusammen,

würde mich freuen wenn jemand einmal schauen könnte ob ich diesen Text so korrekt geschrieben habe:


The story is based on true events that occurred during my stay abroad in Sydney.

Long discussions about this topic with a friend in a café lead to this historical overview.
Please keep in mind that here are a bunch of exciting details that are can not be discussed in detail.

Vielen Dak und Gruss,
Harjon

[Delfino]

This story is based on true events that occurred during my stay abroad (in Sydney).

The long discussions that I have had with a friend about this topic (in a café) lead to this historical overview.

This historical overview is a result of long discussions about this topic that I have had with a friend (in an idyllic seaside café).

Please keep in mind that there are a few exciting details that are cannot be discussed in detail here.