Berichtigung der Sätze

[Boddis]

Hallo,

ich wäre euch sehr dankbar, wenn ihr die Sätze kurz berichtigen könntet:

I like working with people and especially with children. My happy and equable nature helps me dealing with stressful situations. Furthermore I am reliable and have a great sense of responsibility towards other people. As I am a very open- minded and communcative person I would love to be a part of the team.


I would love to improve my pedagogical skills further. As being part of one of my first travel experience in life it was a very intensive experience. THANK YOU SO MUCH!

[tiorthan]

Hallo,

ich wäre euch sehr dankbar, wenn ihr die Sätze kurz berichtigen könntet:

I like working with people and especially with children. My happy and equable[sub]1[/sub] nature helps me to deal with stressful situations. Furthermore I am reliable and have a great sense of responsibility towards other people. As I am a very open- minded and communcative person I would love to be a part of the team.


I would love to further improve my pedagogical skills. As being part of one of my first travel experience in life it was a very intensive experience. 2 THANK YOU SO MUCH!

1 - I'm not so sure if you really want equable nature here. Equable means "free from many changes". Someone who's equally bad at all times also has an equable nature. What I'd advise is using "balanced" or "agreeable" or maybe "even-tempered" or something along those lines.

2 - I'm not sure what you mean here. Is that something you did in the past?