Ich wäre euch total dankbar, wenn sich jemand den Text durchlesen könnte und meine Fehler finden würde!
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am interested in applying for the post of a secretary which was advertised in the daily magazine on 09.12.2012. I think there are several reasons why I might be the right person for the job.
I am twenty-one years old and I am in my final year at evening school. I am planning to start a degree in Economy at Salzburg University in October 2013. In the meantime I would welcome the oppurtunity to gain some work experience.
My qualifications and experience make me particularly suitable applicant for this post. As you can see from my enclosed CV, i have three years experience in Word-processing, because I worked in an office.
In addition to this, I have learned Englisch and Italian for eight years.
I am generally considered to be outgoing, socialable, motivated and hard-working. I like working in a team an enjoy being with people. In the course of my present job, I have been responsible for the organisation for Events.
The advertisment mentions the fact that applicants need to be availale for four weeks between July and September. I would like to inform you that I am available at this time.
I will glady supply you with any further information you may need. Naturally I would be prepared to come to an interview at you convenience.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully
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