The life of Cat

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The life of Cat

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There is only one hour, then the weekend will be finished. The weekend always passes so fast. So lets see, how I spent it.
On saturday morning I prepared my material for the lessons next week. The Revolution of the Earth around the sun and the genesis of seasons will be the topics in my first two lessons on monday. A student will talk about the composition of the atmosphere. Until now he didn't send the handout to me. I hope he brings it fifteen times by himself tomorrow. But enought about tomorrow. I wanted to write about my weekend.
After preparing my material for the lessons I tried to finish my trousers. You have to know, I attended a sewing-course at the adult education center. The last lesson was last tuesday, but my trousers weren't finish. So I had to finish it at home. I thought it wouldn't take more than two hours, because only the waistband and the hem were missing. After four hours I quitted. The waistband wouldn't fix. So I have to wait for my friend, which will visit me on tuesday. Maybe she'll know what to do next.
Today I was sleeping until ten o'clock. Then I prepared the breakfast for my boyfriend and me. We had a huge diversity: rolls, eggs, different sorts of cheese and sausage, chocolate, marmelade, etc.
After that I continued preparing my material for next week. A few hours later, during we were watching a movie I prepared some waffles with whipped cream and mandarin pieces. This was very tasty!
And now...I have had enough and get excited about go to sleep. :)
I hope you enjoyed reading it. In the next days I will tell you, what happened in school.

Sleep well!
Cat

(Bei der "will"-Form für "wird" oder "werden" war ich mir nicht so sicher, ob das immer passend ist, weil es ja auch noch viele andere Zeitformen gibt, die Handlungen in der Zukunft ausdrücken. Generell bin ich mir mit den Zeitformen relativ unsicher (einfache Vergangenheit vs. Verlaufsform, oder doch was ganz anderes???)
Naja, ich bin mal gespannt, wie die korrigierte Version aussieht. ;) Über Begründungen bei Verbesserungen wäre ich sehr dankbar.)

Keswick (Contributor)

Re: The life of Cat

Beitrag von Keswick (Contributor) »

the_cat hat geschrieben:Only one more hour, then the weekend will be over. The weekend always passes so fast. So let's have a look at how I spent it.
On Saturday morning I prepared my material for the lessons next week. The revolution of the earth around the sun and the genesis of seasons will be the topics in my first two lessons on Monday. A student will talk about the composition of the atmosphere. Until now he hasn't send the handout to me. I hope he brings fifteen copies of it himself tomorrow. But enough about tomorrow. I wanted to write about my weekend.
After preparing my material for the lessons I tried to finish my trousers. You need to know that I attended a sewing course at the adult education center. The last lesson was last Tuesday, but my trousers didn't get finished by then. So I had to finish them at home. I thought it wouldn't take more than two hours, because only the waistband and the hem were missing. After four hours I quit. The waistband wouldn't hold. So I have to wait for my friend, which will visit me on Tuesday. Maybe she'll know what to do next.
Today I slept until ten o'clock. Then I prepared the breakfast for my boyfriend and myself. We had a huge variety of food: rolls, eggs, different sorts of cheese and cold meats, chocolate spread, marmelade, etc. (marmelade or jam?)
After that I continued preparing my material for next week. A few hours later, while we were watching a movie I prepared some waffles with whipped cream and mandarin pieces. They were very tasty!
And now...I have had enough and get excited about going to sleep. :)
I hope you enjoyed reading this. In the coming days I will tell you what happened in school.

Sleep well!
Cat

(Bei der "will"-Form für "wird" oder "werden" war ich mir nicht so sicher, ob das immer passend ist, weil es ja auch noch viele andere Zeitformen gibt, die Handlungen in der Zukunft ausdrücken. Generell bin ich mir mit den Zeitformen relativ unsicher (einfache Vergangenheit vs. Verlaufsform, oder doch was ganz anderes???)
Naja, ich bin mal gespannt, wie die korrigierte Version aussieht. ;) Über Begründungen bei Verbesserungen wäre ich sehr dankbar.)