da ich nächstes Jahr im 5. Semester bin muss ich einen Praxissemester absolvieren.
Ich habe da mal eine Bewerbung geschrieben, nur weiß ich leider nich ob es fehlerhaft ist.
Ich bitte um korrektur oder verbesserungsvorschläge , ich würde mich so darauf freuen
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Ich bedanke mich im voraus .Hier ist die Bewerbung bitteschön
:Dear Mr. [complete name and title],
Through your website I became aware of your company.
I am very interested in an internship with ** and believe that I could be a valuable addition.
to your team due to my education and experience.
Prior to my apprenticeship, which provided me with practical experience in industrial engineering,
I was awarded a secondary school diploma called Abitur with focus on computer science.
I have got many certificates as Cisco, digital technology and MS- Office .
I would like to deepen my knowledge in engineering and gain experience internationally through
an internship in your company. I am also interested in learning about your company, the American people
and American culture. Hopefully, this internship would also allow me to utilize and improve my English skills. In the future I intend to focus my studies on the business aspects
of engineering.
I would really like to work in your company for 6 months between September 2013 and March 2014.
In the meantime I intend to participate in a language study program to prepare myself for a period
of residence in the United States.
Please find attached a copy of my resume with more details about my qualifications for the position.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Sincerely,
(Name)