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The dog, which lives in the house of the family Mayr, is named “Cindy”. Actually she is the dog of my sister Nadine, but I spend a lot of time with this dog. We have already seen a lot and because of that, I write about this little, cute Chiwawa.
When I walk into the kitchen in the morning, Cindy already waiting for me, because she knows when I wake up. When I eat breakfast she lies down under the table and waits until something falls down, preferably salami. Therefore I call Cindy a little crook. She takes note of this unimpressed and get away with the salami.
When I’m back at home from school, we take a walk. It’s really nice to see the little dog play with other dogs or explore the neighborhood. She also enjoy the walks but is also happy if we finished the walk and we are at home.
Cindy makes us very happy and each day is unique.
It’s clear that I cannot imagine a life without this dog and hope we can still spend several years together.
mfg Franz
Bitte um Korrektur
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Duckduck (Contributor)
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Well done!franz-21 hat geschrieben:Ist ein kurzer HÜ-Text
Hi franz-21 und willkommen im Forum!
Nee, leider nicht ganz ohne Fehler, aber das macht ja nix. Schaun wir mal:
The dog, which lives in the house of the family Mayr, is named “Cindy”. So ist dieser Satz ein wenig umständlich. Vorschlag: There is a dog living with the Mayrs, her name is Cindy.
Actually, she is my sister Nadine's dog, but I spend a lot of time with her. We have already seen a lot meinst Du hier: haben eine Menge zusammen erlebt?, dann besser: we have been through a lot together and because of that, I will write about this cute little Chihuahua.
When I walk into the kitchen in the morning, Cindy is already waiting for me, because she knows when I wake up. When I have breakfast she lies down under the table and waits for something to fall down, preferably salami. I usually call her "little crook" then, but that doesn't bother her one bit and she leaves with the salami.
When I come home from school, we take a walk. It’s really nice to see the little dog play with other dogs or explore the neighbourhood. She obviously enjoys the walks but she is also happy when they are over and we go home again.
Cindy makes us very happy and each day is special/unique.
I cannot imagine life without this dog and I hope we will spend a lot of years together yet.
mfg Franz
Duckduck