Es waere nett wenn jemand es fuer mich korrigiert :)

[viktor98]

Hallo,
ich muss ein Lebenslauf schreiben.
Es ware nett wenn jemand es verbessern koentte.
Danke im Voraus


I have always loved it meeting my friends and playing football with them
My favorites subjects are Sport and Art.
My next holiday I would spend it in america and improve my english skills.
Also are you would see in america the big cars. My last holiday I spend in greece but it was too hot.

Education: 2004-2010 Primary/Elementary school : Linden Grundschule

2010-2012 Secondary school: Carl Friedrich von Siemems

2012 to date Secondary school : Katholische Schule Liebfrauen

Qualification\Skills

Football : 6 years I played football

Tennis : 2 years to date I play Tennis


IT Skills : Good knowledge op Open Office Writer


Language skills : German and Polish native speaker, good written and spoken English some french


Works expierence : 2012 in the holidays I worked by my dad


Hobbies and interestst


I play football in my free time with my friends.Also I play tennis in a team (Seeburg).
I enjoy playing Playstation.
Sometimes I read a book or often I listen to the music.

[ScottyBoy]

I have always loved it meeting my friends and playing football with them
My favorites subjects are Sports (wir sagen normalweise "Athletics") and Art.
I will spend my next holiday I would spend it in america and improve my english skills.
Also are you would see in america the big cars. My last holiday I spent in greece, but it was too hot.

Education: 2004-2010 Primary/Elementary school : Linden Grundschule

2010-2012 Secondary school: Carl Friedrich von Siemems

2012 to date -current Secondary school : Katholische Schule Liebfrauen

Qualification\Skills

Football : 6 years I played football (Besser wird einfach "I played football 6 years" oder "I played football for 6 years"

Tennis : 2 years to date I play Tennis (I have played Tennis 2 years to date.)
Wir sagen "have played," weil dieser Satz zur Gegenwart verbunden ist. Wie auf Deutsch man benutzt das Perfekt mit "haben" oder "sein." Auf Englisch man benutzt nur "have."


IT Skills : Good knowledge of Open Office Writer


Language skills : German and Polish native speaker, good written and spoken English, some french


Works expierence : 2012 during the 2012 holidays I worked with my dad


Hobbies and interestst


I play football in my free time with my friends. Also I play tennis on a team (Seeburg).
I enjoy playing Playstation.
Sometimes I read a book or often I listen to the music.

Hallo Viktor!
Also are you would see in America the big cars.


Ich weiß nicht genau was du damit meinst. Aber ich glaube du hast gemeint: Also, I would like to see the big cars in America.

Bevorzugst du, dass ich auf Deutsch oder Englisch korrigieren? Von Zeit zu Zeit mache ich noch Fehler auf Deutsch. Deshalb frage ich.

Scott