Vortrag über mich!

[nici2332]

Hallo,
ich muss in 2 Wochen einen Vortrag über mich selbst halten und bin mir noch etwas unsicher.
Hier meine Sätze:
Hello all, Today, I want to introduce myself.
My name is Nicole and I’m 25 years old.
I come from .... , but since 2010 I live in ... .
I moved to ...., because of my boyfriend.
My whole Family lives in ... .
My parents are self-employed and have a guesthouse in ... .
I have a brother, a sister and 3 nieces.

My hobbies are: painting, reading, cooking and meet friends.
My Education:
In 2003 I completed the Realschule. (Habe keine richtige Übersetzung gefunden)
Ongoing, I visited the upper school and (Gibt es eine bessere Übersetzung für Fachoberschule?) graduated in 2005 with the
general technical college qualification. (Ist das dir richtige Übersetzung für die allgemeine Fachhochschulreife?)
My working live:
In 2009 I finished my first training as dentist nurse.
I worked 3 years in this profession.
Until I realized it is not the right job for me.
So, I started in august this year, a new training for real estate agent.
I choose this profession, because it is a versatile and communicative job.
My colleagues are very nice and I can learn a lot.
Thank you for paying attention.

Hoffe ihr könnt mir noch ein wenig helfen, vielen Dank.
Liebe Grüße
Nicole

[nici2332]

Kann mir denn niemand helfen, ich brauche es nun schon bis nächsten Montag....

[Keswick (Contributor)]

Hallo,
ich muss in 2 Wochen einen Vortrag über mich selbst halten und bin mir noch etwas unsicher.
Hier meine Sätze:
Hello all, today, I want to introduce myself.
My name is Nicole and I'm 25 years old.
I come from .... , but I have lived in ... since 2010.
I moved to ...., because of my boyfriend.
My whole family lives in ... .
My parents are self-employed and have a guesthouse in ... .
I have a brother, a sister and 3 nieces.

My hobbies are: painting, reading, cooking and meeting friends.
My education:
In 2003 I completed the Realschule. (Habe keine richtige Übersetzung gefunden -- secondary school)
Ongoing, I visited the upper school and (Gibt es eine bessere Übersetzung für Fachoberschule? -- maybe technical college?) graduated in 2005 with the
general technical college qualification. (Ist das dir richtige Übersetzung für die allgemeine Fachhochschulreife? -- I'd say so)
My working live:
In 2009 I finished my first training as dentist nurse.
I worked in this profession for 3 years until I realized that it is not the right job for me.
So, I started a new training as real estate agent in August this year.
I choose this profession, because it is a versatile and communicative job.
My colleagues are very nice and I can learn a lot.
Thank you for your attention.

Hoffe ihr könnt mir noch ein wenig helfen, vielen Dank.
Liebe Grüße
Nicole

Sorry for the delay.

[nici2332]

Vielen Dank!