Da mein Englisch nicht gerade gut ist wäre ich SEHR dankbar wenn jemand meinen text mal kurz durchlesen könnte und mal gucken könnte ab die vokabeln und die zeiten richtig sind??? für ein paar verbesserungen wäre ich auch nicht abgeneigt.
war mir bei break für brechen/kotzen nich so sicher z.B. da es ja eigentlich im zusammenhang mit durchbrechen stht
PLZ help
On Sunday 25.09 I had my 25th birthday. I have purely celebrated from Saturday on Sunday,
because many guests Monday had to get up again early. my guests came about at 18 o'clock
to me. We played some party games,dart and drank naturally also something.
After a few Beers, a good friend of me felt very badly, he even had to break.
After he had slept, it was better to him. I received a lot of presents:
pants, cds, a computer game, some money and some other things.
It was a very funny evening.When it became 12 o'clock, all got up and sang a song for me.
this was already quite unpleasantly for me, but this just belongs to it.
at 4 o'clock in the morning the last guests went home and, at last, I could also lie down.
It was really very beautiful and everybody will remember the evening still long.