Comment ( Englisch )

[NoAir12345]

Und zwar schreibe ich nächste Woche eine englisch Klausur , wo wir einen comment verfassen müssen. Könnte bitte jemand meinen comment korrigieren und schreiben was ich falsch gemacht habe. Danke (was ich über einen comment weiß, ist dass im Hauptteil pro und- / contra Argumente vokommen, dennoch fallen mir hierzu keine ein könnt ihr mir vllt. beispiele nennen?!?) .
"Comment on the problem between parents and teenagers and how to solve them."
Nowadays their are big problems between parents and teenagers but how schould we solve them ?
I think it's normal that sometimes parents and teenagers just have big conflicts about a theme. Both sides have often seperate opinions and it's hard to come on one conclusion . You can solve problems if you sit together and discuss about it, in my opinion it's the best solution you can do. But its also important that teenagers should listen to their parents what they want to say, what is a big problem.
All in all I would say that teenagers and parents should talk clearly about the problem , so they will come to conclusion.

[Keswick (Contributor)]

Und zwar schreibe ich nächste Woche eine Englischklausur, in der wir einen comment verfassen müssen. Könnte bitte jemand meinen comment korrigieren und schreiben was ich falsch gemacht habe. Danke (was ich über einen comment weiß, ist dass im Hauptteil pro und- / contra Argumente vokommen, dennoch fallen mir hierzu keine ein könnt ihr mir vllt. Beispiele nennen?!?) .


"Comment on the problem between parents and teenagers and how to solve them."
Nowadays there are big problems between parents and teenagers but how can we solve them ?
I think it's normal that sometimes parents and teenagers just have arguments about a topic. Both sides often have separate opinions and it's hard to come to one conclusion . You can solve problems if you sit together and discuss about them, in my opinion this is the best solution you can do. But it is also important that teenagers should listen to their parents and to what they have to say, what is a big problem. (das verstehe ich nicht)
All in all I would say that teenagers and parents should talk clearly about the problem , so they can find a solution.