The Life

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The Life

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Our life has brought us pain and suffering and loss.
But it's also brought us together, as families, allies, friends.
This bond that ties us together is something that some people will never understand.
It’s more powerful than any weapon, stronger than anything else in this whole universe.
What do you think?

Keswick (Contributor)

Re: The Life

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I am not sure what you want us to do here. Do you want a correction or would you like us to comment with our own opinions?

Miles

Re: The Life

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I think these things depend on your perspective.
I never took life as it brought me pain or such things.It is like a journey to me,and i'm a traveller.
In this journey i seek the truth,the purpose of life.Once i make sure that i find it,i try to teach it.I try to call people to the path i have been walking on.
I seek the light as a butterfly does.I love the example
of butterflies.Their lives do not last that long.Neither do ours.Compared to the age of our universe ( about 14 billion )
our lives are way shorther than the life of a butterfly.

About families i feel the same with you.But just as i said it may change from person to person.I once had a friend whose family caused her only pain and suffering.
What does not change is that we all have more than we deserve.We have done absolutely nothing to earn the things that we had once we were born.I think something is asked in return... .. .

Syntax

Re: The Life

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I wanted to know if it's true.

Damn I made a mistake xD
No EDIT button??
I wrote "It's also brought us together", but it has to be "It also brought us together"
Sry :D

tiorthan

Re: The Life

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Actually, the correct grammar is "it has brought us together."