ich bitte um eine Korrektur bzgl. der Grammatik und Rechtschreibung folgenden Textes:
Thank you very much!Well, the summer holidays have begun, but those holidays are slightly different from the summer holidays until now. That's because I have found a holiday job in order to earn my own money. The work is exhausting, because I must hold hard boxes. But nevertheless I think it's important to have a holiday job, because through them you can get to know new people and make experiences about the sort of you work. Having said that, to earn own money was the most important purpose for me to search for a holiday job. Well, with money you can buy or do a lot of things, so in my opinion it is worthwile to work in the holidays.
Of course, on the other hand you must neglect your leisure time activities, but if you work on the summer holidays you can only work for three and for the rest of your holidays you can relax and meet your friends more often.
Apart from that my holiday job I learned very much for the school, because I want to have good marks in order to be able to visit my favorite university.
Sometimes I met my friends and we played football together or we visited a cinema.
Well, my holidays are exciting until yet!
