Katrin phones someone to invite them to meeting.

[Kevin76]

Kann einer bitte mal rüberschauen ob es so ok ist? Danke

Katrin: Hello Kevin, here is Katrin! How are you doing?
Kevin: Hello Katrin. Nice to hear you!
Katrin: Mark suggested that we should talk about the new products. I would invite you with pleasure to the meeting.
Kevin: Of course! I take part in the meeting. When should she take place?
Katrin: On Friday at 13.00 o’clock in the conference room.
Kevin: Ok! I have taken down it. Should I bring something?
Katrin: No, you don’t need. Everything is there.
Kevin: Well. How long will the meeting last?
Katrin: About one hour.
Kevin: Ok, then till Friday I pleases me. Bye.
Katrin: Ok, Bye!

[Delfino]

Kann jemand bitte meinen Dialog korrekturlesen, ist er ok so?
Danke!

Katrin: Hello Kevin, here is Katrin! How are you doing?
Kevin: Hello Katrin. Nice to hear from you! How are you doing?

Katrin: Mark suggested that we talk about the new products. So it's my pleasure to invite you to our meeting.
Kevin: Of course I'll take part in the meeting. When and where do we meet?

Katrin: It's scheduled for Friday at 13.00 o’clock in the conference room.
Kevin: Ok! I've taken it down. / I've penciled it in.
Should I bring something?

Katrin: No, you don’t need to bring anything. We've got everything there.
Kevin: Well. How long will this meeting last?

Katrin: About an hour.
Kevin: Ok, then I'll see you on Friday. Bye.

Katrin: Ok, bye!