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Hilf bei Text

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Moin Moin

Ich brauche mal wieder eure Hilfe. Ihr könnt ja mal über den Text schauen und nach Grammatik und Rechtschreibfehlern ausschau halten.
Der Inhalt wird vielleicht nen bißchen fragwürdig sein, aber mir viel nichts besseres ein...:)
Schon mal Danke im vorraus.

My favorite city would be Hamburg. It is in the north of Germany. Currently I live nearby Hamburg, so I can often visit it and have a good imagine of this city. Hamburg is very big and has a population over 1,8 million. In the city you can find a lot of nice places like the Alster, the Michell or the Kiez and Hamburg has a big industrial and economic develop. Some friends of me work and life there, so I can often meet them. Hamburg provides wonderful apartments or flats. Maybe they are more expensive as in the countryside. It is easy to find a job, when you want. All national and international companies have branches and offices in HH. In the future I’m going to study “chemical and environment engineering” and I think I will have the best conditions there. A further and interesting possibility to work is as a policeman.

It will never be boring. At the weekend you can celebrate in a lot of pubs, bars or clubs. A part of HH is St.Pauli, there is the famous street “Reeperbahn”. You can celebrate all day the week and almost every hour of the day. When I need it a little bit quiter I go to one of dozens restaurants. Every favors will find a suitable restaurant.
Many friends of me can visit me and we will have a lot of fun.
I’m a big football fan. In HH are two stadiums where I can watch a match.

A further advantage would be the traffic links. I mustn’t drive so often with my car. I can go by train or bus and reach every part of HH in a few minutes. It’s cheaper and ecologically friendly than with a car.
I must feel well in a city and I think will do it in Hamburg. My parents and my family can visit me all the time and I can visit them. I only must drive one hour.
But the most important point to move to Hamburg is that I have better professional perspective. I can change between a lot of possibilities and so perhaps I can earn more and more money. In the next year I’m going to make up my college in Hamburg and I will have a very good insight of living in a big city.

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Re: Hilf bei Text

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keiner so Hilfreich diesmal?