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Queen Elizabeth II sits since 60 years on the British throne.
The Majority of the British people celebrate this diamond jubilee, but there is also a minority who is against this system of monarchy.
One example of an opponent of this system is Andrew Child: He criticizes the way, how the employees and the attendants care for the royal family.
For example, the corgis, queen, the dogs of the British, gets their food from a royal cook.
An other example: Prince Charles has over 100 employees, who care for him and his wife Camilla.
These were only a few examples of thousands.
The four days, from Sunday to Tuesday are days, Which the economists are afraid of, because the productivity of the economy suffers from this free days.
Andrew Child and other opponents of the monarchy are in a minority.
Their association "Republic", have a plenty of members, who are jealous of the systems of Germany and Ireland, where the chief of state will be either voted by a Federal Assembly or by the People.
After the wedding of Kate and William, the royals have become popular like superstars.
One can remark this on the video, where usain bolt runs against Prince Harry: This video has become one of the most viewed videos in the country.
Remarkable is the fact, how the queen has managed all of the crisis.
The biggest crisis was the death of Diana, Which was generated by herself.
But her critics have to concede, that the queen is a hard working, dutiful and sometimes charming person.
The ascent of the throne of Elizabeth based on a number of flukes.
13 Years After The ascent of the throne, Rolf Seelmann Eggebert stepped into her life.
1978, he went to LOndon, since then, he reports highlights of all the royals for ARD.
Seelmann.Eggebert says: "two things are important for the monarchy: the continuity and the mysterious."
What he means is, that monarchs dont disappear after a few years like presidents and a federal monarchy always lives with the myth, Which it surrounds.
It is therefore conspicuos, that the queen had invited regents of all over the world two weeks ago.
Normally, the government descides, who the queen has to meet.
1978, the queen had to meet with reluctance the dictator Nicolae Ceausescu.
But this time, the queen had herself decide who she wants to invite.
The most significant thing is, that more Britons rejoice over the jubilee of the queen as over the European championship or the olympic games.
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Queen Elizabeth II sits on the British throne since 60 years.
The Majority of the British people celebrate this diamond jubilee, but there is also a minority who is against this system of monarchy.
One example of an opponent of this system is Andrew Child: He criticizes the way, how the employees and the attendants care for the royal family.
For example, the corgis, queen, the dogs of the British, get their food from a royal cook.
Another example: Prince Charles has over 100 employees, who care for him and his wife Camilla.
These were only a few examples of thousands.
The four days, from Sunday to Tuesday, are days, which the economists are afraid of because the productivity of the economy suffers from these free days.
Andrew Child and other opponents of the monarchy are in a minority.
Their association "Republic", has a plenty of members, who are jealous of the systems of Germany and Ireland, where the chief of state is either elected by a Federal Assembly or by the People.
After the wedding of Kate and William, the royals have become as popular as superstars.
One can remark this on the video, where Usain Bolt runs against Prince Harry: This video has become one of the most viewed videos in the country.
Remarkable is the fact, how the queen has managed all of the crisis.
The biggest crisis was the death of Diana, which was generated by herself.
But her critics have to concede that the queen is a hard working, dutiful and sometimes charming person.
The ascension to the throne of Elizabeth based on a number of flukes.
13 Years after the ascension to the throne, Rolf Seelmann Eggebert stepped into her life.
1978, he went to London, since then, he reports highlights of all the royals for ARD.
Seelmann Eggebert says: "Two things are important for the monarchy: the continuity and the mysterious."
What he means is, that monarchs don't disappear after a few years like presidents. A federal monarchy always lives with the myth, which it surrounds.
It is therefore conspicuos, that the queen had invited regents of all over the world two weeks ago.
Normally, the government decides, which people the queen has to meet.
1978, the queen had to meet with reluctance the dictator Nicolae Ceausescu.
But this time, the queen had decide by herself who she wants to invite.
The most significant thing is, that more Britons rejoice at the jubilee of the queen as over the European championship or the olympic games.
Good Job! I hope I found all of the little mistakes.
greetings
Chris
The Majority of the British people celebrate this diamond jubilee, but there is also a minority who is against this system of monarchy.
One example of an opponent of this system is Andrew Child: He criticizes the way, how the employees and the attendants care for the royal family.
For example, the corgis, queen, the dogs of the British, get their food from a royal cook.
Another example: Prince Charles has over 100 employees, who care for him and his wife Camilla.
These were only a few examples of thousands.
The four days, from Sunday to Tuesday, are days, which the economists are afraid of because the productivity of the economy suffers from these free days.
Andrew Child and other opponents of the monarchy are in a minority.
Their association "Republic", has a plenty of members, who are jealous of the systems of Germany and Ireland, where the chief of state is either elected by a Federal Assembly or by the People.
After the wedding of Kate and William, the royals have become as popular as superstars.
One can remark this on the video, where Usain Bolt runs against Prince Harry: This video has become one of the most viewed videos in the country.
Remarkable is the fact, how the queen has managed all of the crisis.
The biggest crisis was the death of Diana, which was generated by herself.
But her critics have to concede that the queen is a hard working, dutiful and sometimes charming person.
The ascension to the throne of Elizabeth based on a number of flukes.
13 Years after the ascension to the throne, Rolf Seelmann Eggebert stepped into her life.
1978, he went to London, since then, he reports highlights of all the royals for ARD.
Seelmann Eggebert says: "Two things are important for the monarchy: the continuity and the mysterious."
What he means is, that monarchs don't disappear after a few years like presidents. A federal monarchy always lives with the myth, which it surrounds.
It is therefore conspicuos, that the queen had invited regents of all over the world two weeks ago.
Normally, the government decides, which people the queen has to meet.
1978, the queen had to meet with reluctance the dictator Nicolae Ceausescu.
But this time, the queen had decide by herself who she wants to invite.
The most significant thing is, that more Britons rejoice at the jubilee of the queen as over the European championship or the olympic games.
Good Job! I hope I found all of the little mistakes.
greetings
Chris