Vielleicht könnt ihr es mal kurz korrigieren und evtl was ergänzen.
Also:
Dear members of the selection committee,
I hereby apply for a place in the master’s program in “xyz” at the School of xyz.
First of all, I would like to introduce myself. My name is xyz and I am xyz years old.
In May of this year, I have completed my studies at the School of xyz with the academic degree Bachelor of Laws (LL.B.).
During my studies I have got an overview of the most important areas of law. Criminal law, constitutional law, employment law and also european law I found particularly interesting and so the master’s program in “xyz” would fit perfectly to my interests.
Furthermore the master’s program is internationally orientated and I think it would open up excellent career opportunities.
I would like to thank you for considering my application and I look forward to your positive response.
Yours faithfully,
Am besten wäre noch irgendwo einzubauen, dass er mich auch interessiert, da ich somit auch meine Englisch-Kenntnisse verbessern könnte und dies ja heutzutage eine große Rolle spielt…oder so ähnlich. Ich danke euch!
