Korrektur "letter of conduct"

[danyo]

Wäre äußerst dankbar wenn hier ein amerikanischer muttersprachler mal drüber lesen und mir eventuelle verbesserungsvorschläge geben könnte


Dear Mr. ......,

I am student at the University of Augsburg, Germany. My major is Business Management and my special interest is in Supply Chain Management with minors in Environmental Management (ISO14001). I have been studying English since High School, improved my language skills with a Working Holiday in Australia and have always been interested in foreign cultures.

Coming to the end of my studies, I want to put my acquired business skills once more into practice. I have learned how to improve and optimize business processes along supply chains and would like to apply these skills to DTNA. Starting in September or October, I would particularly welcome the opportunity to obtain an internship for 4-6. The enclosed resume outlines my educational background and working experience.

Realizing the limitations of a resume alone, I would welcome the opportunity for a telephone interview and explore the matter further.

Thank you for your consideration.I look forward to hearing from you.

Sincerely,

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[Delfino]

Ich wäre äußerst dankbar wenn hier ein amerikanischer Muttersprachler einmal korrekturlesen und mir eventuelle Verbesserungsvorschläge geben könnte.


Dear Mr. ...,

I am a student at the University of Augsburg, Germany. My major is Business Management
with minors in Supply Chain Management and Environmental Management (ISO14001).

I have learned how to improve and optimize business processes along supply chains and
would like to apply these skills at DTNA. Starting in September or October, I would particularly
welcome the opportunity to obtain an internship position for 4-6 months.

I have always been interested in foreign cultures, enjoyed studying English since high school,
and improved my language skills with a working holiday in Australia.

Coming to the end of my studies, I want to put my acquired business skills once more into practice.

The enclosed resume outlines my educational background and work experience. Realizing the
limitations of a resume alone, I would welcome the opportunity for a telephone interview
to explore the matter further.

Thank you for your consideration. I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Sincerely,

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