correct?

[Beli1970]

Hallo an alle,
in einem Kreisdiagramm werden die Schüler und die Nutzung des Computers dargestellt.(Erläuterung)

   
We conducted a survey of our class about using different media.
My friends and me asked all of our classmates this 2 questions:
1.    1.Have you got a computer at home?
2.    2.If so, how many hours a day do you use it?


Here is a pie chart (or circle diagram) to show the statistic.
You can see easily the average is to have a computer and to up to two hours a day. This survey doesn’t say anything about the purpose of using. The daily use of this media of course has a big influence in young people’s life. But there is a big different whether you play shooting games at LAN-parties or you check the news or the wikipedia for doing homework.

Ich würde mich freuen, wenn jemand darüber liest, damit kein sachlicher Fehler passiert.

Thanks a lot!

[Keswick (Contributor)]

Hallo an alle,
in einem Kreisdiagramm werden die Schüler und die Nutzung des Computers dargestellt.(Erläuterung)


We conducted a survey in our class about the usage of different media.
My friends and I asked all of our class mates the following 2 questions:
1. 1.Have you got a computer at home?
2. 2.If so, how many hours a day do you use it for?


Here is a pie chart (or circle diagram) to show the statistic.
You can easily see that the average of participants have a computer and that they use it up to two hours a day. This survey doesn’t say anything about the purpose of usage. The daily use of this media of course has a big influence on young people’s life. But there is a big difference between playing shooting games at LAN-parties or checking the news or the wikipedia for doing homework.

Ich würde mich freuen, wenn jemand darüber liest, damit kein sachlicher Fehler passiert.

Thanks a lot!

[Beli1970]

Hello and thank you Keswick,

Ooops, there were more mistakes than I expected,

so once again

THANK YOU !